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You are literally killing me. Great story so far though!

I really like this story. I hope Ren and Sidney get together. They would be a really cute couple.

Excited to see what happens next! I really like this story!

I seriously love this story - the sexual tension between the two of them is unreal. I like that Ren is spunky and calls him on his shit - and it is sweet that Sid feels like he has to make it up to her.

Sid is a little pushy about the concussion - but who could blame him after all he has been through. But I did think the doctor was a little presumptuous in the things he said to Sid as he was leaving.

Kathy has either the best or the worst timing - depending upon your point of view. I really hope he doesnt sleep with her. He can always use the excuse that he has to check on Ren because of the "concussion".

I think there is some real emotion brewing between Sid and Ren - it will be interesting to see how they deal with it.

a part of me expects him and ren to get together and go the whole nine yards but that would be the cliche thing that everyone would expect and you dont seem like that kind of writer to do that (congratulations for being different) so idk what to expect...update soon!

I've seriously been stalking my subscriptions like I've been let out on day release from the local loony bin. This story is just so god damn good.

There is some sexual tension between these two for sure. I don't think it'll be long before they find a way to put an end to it
And I just adored how she called out sidney after he called her a fangirl

I think we're slowly seeing the nice sidney come out as he gets to know ren better and I thought it was sweet how he showed a genuine concern for her after the incident in his bathroom.

I hope Sid doesn't break rens heart. Then again, I hope ren doesn't break sids's. they'd make such a sweet couple.

As for Kathy, she needs to GTFO !! Talk about bad timing.

Sidney better not sleep with Kathy! He needs to send the skank away! He also needs to go join Ren in bed watching the game! :) Can't wait for more! <3

Wow long chapter, nice job! I love the way they interact with each other, it's really cute. I really really hope Sidney doesn't sleep with Kathy. He needs to check on Ren every couples hours. I think he should send Kathy packing and take care of Ren. Very excited to read the next chapter.

Maybe he just shouldn't have answered the door? It isn't like she has a key, right? But damn that timing! Grr...

I loved all the facts on Walker. And how she proved she was no fan girl!

Great chapter! Can't wait for more!

LOVE LOOOVEE LOOOOVVEEEEE the length of this update, hope you can update soon ireally love this story (I know I just said that). The way they work together is. So quirky and playful and it's interestingthat he thinks it's sexual and she's confused. Fuck kathy!

Ahhh! I loved this update! I love the way they interact with each other, how it can be so playful and sarcastic at one moment, and completely serious the next. I love the way you incorporate her friendship with Charity and such. I cannot wait for what's next!

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Finally catching up! Sorry that it's taken me so long. Real life is being such a huge bitch right now.

I love how protective Mrs Hernandez is of Sid. I'm not letting some hootchie cootchie sneak in here... hahahaha I can understand where she'd think every young woman is out to get their clutches into him, and I'm glad that little misunderstanding got worked out. Although I am a little worried that no one will take her seriously because of how young she is.

I love Charity. She's so hilarious. She's such a very good friend, always trying to boost Ren's self esteem. I hope that both these lovely ladies get a real chance at love. Some guy that's going to love them for who they are. That's what they deserve. They're such a fierce twosome. So different, yet so perfect for each other.

Awww...poor Tucker. Shot down! lol

HAHAHAHAHAHA Walking in on Sid and his gf bumping uglies. I don't blame Ren, I would have stopped and watched too. And probably hoped they'd notice and be kinky enough to ask me to join ;)

Sid's pissed. Oh Sid. You could have had two women at your disposal *sigh*

OMG...he's just losing it on her. I like this side of him. It's kind of sexy to see him as a bully. He's being so harsh and so mean and it's kinda hot and horrible at the same time.

Temporary housekeeper, Sid. Get it right. Sheesh. Why is he having such a hard time believing her? Although with the amount of loons he probably runs into on a daily basis, I can't blame him for being so careful.

Charity sounds so much like me. She really does lol

There's a lot of electricity between these two. I sense hot monkey sex in the near future. Or at least I am hoping for it.

I find her so adorable. The image I have in my head of her. She's just precious. And I think Sid thinks so too ;)

Don't lie, Sid. You want her pancakes ;)

Kathy is probably a gold digging whore. I hope the sex is worth it, at least.

Looking forward to more!

update soon? PLEASE

Just found this Omg such a fan already

ahhhh! love it <3 cannot wait for more :)

Such a good plot and I can't wait to see where this goes. I love how Ren always reminds Sid that she's his "Temporary housekeeper".
I have a feeling Sidney will convience her to stay longer then planned just to get to know her better

update soooooon :)))

I can totally see Sid not trusting a lot of people. And Ren is just adorable. lol.
Love the chapter! Great work. Can't wait for more!

Wishes: Sid slowly starts to trust her more and more, brings her to games and stuff. One of his teammates asks her out and they date for a while but eventually decide that they're better as friends THEN Sid makes some epic gesture and Happily Ever After :)

Can't wait for more!