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  • Jordyn4

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    I really love this story so far. I like how you write Sid. He is very obviously kind and sweet, but he is not naive or completely socially inept like he is in so many stories. I also like that he seems to be a bit "frisky," which is alway fun!

    I think Ren and Sid would make an awesome couple. She is nothing like what I'm guessing he is use to (see "supermodel" Kathy). Plus I think Sid could bring out a different side of Ren (especially in the bedroom...).

    Can't wait for the next update. I hope it comes soon.
    September 25th, 2012 at 04:50am
  • bxgurl95

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    ps. update sooooon!
    September 25th, 2012 at 04:34am
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    ps. update sooooon!
    September 25th, 2012 at 04:34am
  • bxgurl95

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    Girls whp can cook always get the guy lol ;p can't wait for more
    September 25th, 2012 at 04:33am
  • wintersgirl1608

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    Loved it! Can't wait for more.
    September 25th, 2012 at 04:10am
  • hockeychick37

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    update soon!
    September 25th, 2012 at 04:08am
  • Bismuth

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    I was so looking forward to this :) I'm really liking the way you're portraying Sid in this story. He's usually written as the nice guy but I think this is way more fun... Update soon!
    September 25th, 2012 at 03:49am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    I loved their interaction in the kitchen! Can't wait for more! <3
    September 25th, 2012 at 03:44am
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    I like that Ren stood her ground - and that Sid didnt throw her out. It was interesting that Sid was becoming quite "affected" by Ren, especially just in her tshirt.

    I like them dancing around each other a bit - but Sid sure revealed a lot of himself to Ren - trusting her quite quickly....which seems rare, especially if he makes his ex girl friend sign an non-disclosure.

    Hope you update again soon.
    September 25th, 2012 at 03:32am
  • bublbabie

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    I think they would be great together. They are both so passionate about their jobs. I hope he falls for her, it kind of seems like he already is. I can't wait for the next chapter
    September 25th, 2012 at 03:28am
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    Well thank god ren didn't end up in jail !!
    I think we're going to see their feelings for each other build, and they're both going to try and fight them as we all know you don't mix business with pleasure. Or at least try not to Smile

    I do agree with the other comments. Ren and Sidney will make a really sweet couple.

    Fab update.
    September 25th, 2012 at 03:22am
  • Ladyfiaran

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    I think Sid and Ren would make a great couple too, she's such a free spirit and as intense as him with her paintings, she would make a great match for him Cool
    September 25th, 2012 at 03:02am
  • dallasstar28

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    I think Sid and Ren would be really cute together. You always write happy endings.
    September 25th, 2012 at 03:00am
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    Oh man. Is Sid gonna believe she's the new housekeeper? What's gonna happen? Awesome start - though your works are always great!! :) I hope there's another update soon!
    September 13th, 2012 at 02:34am
  • msd

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    Yes!! Sid finally gets to fuck "her fiercely against the wall." At this point I don't even care who the "her" is, probably going to hate her anyway. Just glad Sid is reaping the benefits of being a young, rich & sexy guy.
    September 13th, 2012 at 02:04am
  • bxgurl95

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    Def. Didn't see that coming! Angry Sid ;) Kathy's such a dumbass and I like the name Ren. It's unfortunate that's she's become attatched so easily but I'm sure Sid will let her continue being the "housekeeper"
    September 12th, 2012 at 12:30pm
  • mollycool

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    Wow, I did not see that coming!! Excited for this story :)
    September 12th, 2012 at 06:31am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Loved the update...although I could have gone without Kathy and the mental image of her and Sid!
    September 12th, 2012 at 03:42am
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    ah holy crap this was totally unexpected! slutty sidney! o.O but actually im in love with this already please update!
    September 12th, 2012 at 03:29am
  • Jordyn4

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    I really like this so far. I'm excited to see where this goes.
    September 12th, 2012 at 02:57am