Comment swap here. I'm not gonna lie, I'm not usually too impressed with werewolf stories, however yours seemed interesting. I noticed a ton of grammatical mistakes in the first chapter alone and I'd say you should probably go through and edit this again, but other than that, it seemed pretty good! Keep it up!
I had really read a lot of grammatical errors. In my opinion, you need to fix them. The story is already great, if you fix the grammatical errors then I'm probably sure you'll be receiving more readers.
I love Darren and Rose, they both make a beautiful couple to me. I am definitely subscribed to this story!
@ Samantha Sparkle you had better... i know you would laugh if i cried...its happened before... and i not only know where you live.. i know where you sleep..thats creepy but whatever
@ Samantha Sparkle that is why you love me....so you neeeed to start updating more. cause if you dont i will cry...do you really want me to cry.. :)..im even writing this on my 3ds
@ Samantha Sparkle I am helping you get ideas you know this, and I didn't notice any gramer issues from writing it on your iPad so I think you are perfectly able to write another chapter ;)
@ Allicat Oh miss Allie, you of all people should know that I'm camping and how hard it is to type without you on the phone with me saying NO DO THIS lol