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  • polka dot perfection

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    More!
    December 27th, 2012 at 07:03am
  • call of the wild

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    Comment swap here. I'm not gonna lie, I'm not usually too impressed with werewolf stories, however yours seemed interesting. I noticed a ton of grammatical mistakes in the first chapter alone and I'd say you should probably go through and edit this again, but other than that, it seemed pretty good! Keep it up!
    December 27th, 2012 at 01:59am
  • RCL.

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    They're so cute together
    November 30th, 2012 at 07:06am
  • a mimosa pudica

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    I had really read a lot of grammatical errors. In my opinion, you need to fix them. The story is already great, if you fix the grammatical errors then I'm probably sure you'll be receiving more readers.

    I love Darren and Rose, they both make a beautiful couple to me. I am definitely subscribed to this story!
    November 28th, 2012 at 11:15am
  • cocomemoco

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    thats was great .... and no one really cares about grammatical errors
    November 28th, 2012 at 04:18am
  • a lonely robin

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    Oooh, this story is great! More soon? :D
    November 22nd, 2012 at 04:46am
  • Allicat

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    I like Ryder, so if he tries anything I would be extremely angry with him!! I'm sure Darren would too!! Update soon!!
    November 22nd, 2012 at 03:40am
  • polka dot perfection

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    another please:D
    November 10th, 2012 at 02:06am
  • cocomemoco

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    pleSE please please update soon the suspense is killing me
    November 8th, 2012 at 01:29am
  • MadamNixie

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    Please update soon:) I really love this book and I would like to continue reading. Do not delete!!
    October 23rd, 2012 at 02:42am
  • Allicat

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    @ Samantha Sparkle
    At least I don't trip over sticks and paper... You just make funny faces in general lol
    October 21st, 2012 at 09:58pm
  • SleepyHallow1996

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    @ Allicat
    I know where you sleep to, and you laugh at me to lol I can help but laught when you hurt yourself you make that weird face
    October 21st, 2012 at 08:36pm
  • Allicat

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    @ Samantha Sparkle
    you had better... i know you would laugh if i cried...its happened before... and i not only know where you live.. i know where you sleep..thats creepy but whatever
    October 21st, 2012 at 05:17am
  • SleepyHallow1996

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    @ Allicat
    I would giggle if you cried :3 haha just kidding, I'll attempt to when I get home tomorrow....if not...i guess you know where I live lol
    October 21st, 2012 at 05:11am
  • Allicat

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    @ Samantha Sparkle
    that is why you love me....so you neeeed to start updating more. cause if you dont i will cry...do you really want me to cry.. :)..im even writing this on my 3ds
    October 21st, 2012 at 05:09am
  • SleepyHallow1996

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    @ Allicat
    Allie Allie Allie lol you a so funny sometimes :3
    October 20th, 2012 at 10:07pm
  • Allicat

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    @ Samantha Sparkle
    I am helping you get ideas you know this, and I didn't notice any gramer issues from writing it on your iPad so I think you are perfectly able to write another chapter ;)
    October 20th, 2012 at 04:08pm
  • punkurself

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    Keeeeeeep
    I like
    October 20th, 2012 at 01:39pm
  • xxkilljoypresentsxx

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    update soon please !
    October 20th, 2012 at 09:48am
  • SleepyHallow1996

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    @ Allicat
    Oh miss Allie, you of all people should know that I'm camping and how hard it is to type without you on the phone with me saying NO DO THIS lol
    October 20th, 2012 at 04:10am
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