I just read the whole story without stopping. I was suppose to go to bed and just read the first chapter but honestly you're a great writer. Please keep it up, I love their relationship and I'm actually glad you aren't describing their sex scenes as other people on this site do. Keep up everything you're doing
Go so comment swap brought me here. Im going to be honest. I really dislike werewolf stories. They to me seem pointless and annoying but yours isn't half bad :) its really well written. You manage to describe everything wonderfully!! Keep up the good work!
I've never come across a story like this, nor is it something I would read. But I enjoyed reading what I did. Your paragraphs are good, which is something I'm particular about, the layout was a little in my face and I couldn't properly see the chapter titles. But that's just me and my eyes. Your writing was easy to follow, simlple yet descriptive. Couldn't find any spelling mistakes so that's a plus. Keep writing.
Please keep writing this is great!!! and even if there are a few grammar errors nobody cares! You have a great plot and storyline do far that's what keeps readers! Awesome job!
Can't wait for the next chapter