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JORDAN NEARLY SAID HUSBAND!! Holy shit. That's a lot. But he and Summer need to get married like, tomorrow. And then Summer needs to let Jordan take care of her.
Her father is a douche. He needs to be supporting his daughter and not putting her down and telling her to kill his grandbaby. I like the mother, but she seemed a little wishy-wash. But maybe that's just me.
I know I've said it before, but, I really like that you made Summer Tanya's little sister. On that note, I loved what her mom said. "You Staal boys keep stealing my girls!" I found that really funny/cute/true. haha.
I'm curious to see how the team in Pittsburgh is going to take Jordan being a father, with a girl he used to argue with.
I love this story and I cannot wait for the next update!
Gosh her father was a grade A douche canoe!!!! Jordan should have hit him in the nose or jaw, either would have been exceptable. I wanted to punch her father in the nose!!!!