YEEEEEES! I could scream right now but I don't think the people around me at the library would like it ;) Anyway, this chapter is good, I love the fact you made yer think over it before saying a straight yes. It seems more real this way !
Oh goooosh I've read the two new chapters and this is really amazing. I was angry at Matt for being a douche bag but the things he tells her in the second one are pretty much perfect. I love your writing, how you translate perfectly their emotions :) Keep going, I love it!
I'm about to smack Matt right now. UGH. I didn't think it was poorly written though! Her POV is so interesting, I like seeing into her head and what she's thinking. I wish she would knock some sense into him though..oh Matthew. Can't wait for the next update, good luck with classes starting!