Children of Nothing, This Is Our Song - Comments

i can't decide whether this was hilarious or hot... hot or hilarious. you write the stupidest sex scenes but i'm like addicted to them and now when i read really well written smut all i do wait for the punchline... BUT IT NEVER COMES BECAUSE IT'S SERIOUS BUSINESS

oh and make them play doctor in lent or hayberg's office please :D

Oh my god. I thought that was funny as hell. XD I will admit though, I thought Ryan was going to end up fucking Balz at the end of that. Haha, Keep up the good work, like always!

'"He's like a one of those small animals" Ryan commented as he rolled Angelo onto his back and straddled his hips. "Like a, um... those long, furry rat looking dudes. What are they called? Ferrets?"

"I know right!? I thought he'd be a lot less hot to watch from the noises he makes"

"Will you guys shut up and quit egging him on?!"'

I love how Ryan and Ange are just casually discussing that like nothing's happening :')

I love how you make a point of Rick's hair smelling nice and him actually bathing both times... It make it slightly less painful in real life.
But really, it honestly wasn't as bad as you think. Everyone writes awkward buttsecks scenes.

Hot, Sexy and cute all at the same time
I say more butt sex

I think it's cute that they bathe together c: SO MUCH DICK

Ahahahaha, I love you and this story to much. Some of the things are hilarious (Horses in heat and some noise resembling a frog getting crushed). This is freaking awesome. Your notes are just as good, hahaha. Give us your worse (Or best? depending how you look at it) with the kinkiness.

This story truly is amazing, btw when you do get to the kinky stuff the kinkier the better... Like using hot wax and stuff like that :') and omg your authors note at the end made me laugh, but Ricky was clean when I met him so I wouldn't know how dirty he is :')

horses in heat... dude rick makes the worst noises in this story lol

o m g
o m g
i'm beginning to think that's all i'm capable of saying
BUT O M G
YOUR COMMENTS
ARE
SO
FUNNY.
*dies*

I love this story a lot okay -rolls on floor-

That chapter was the cutest and as you put it "lame" chapter ever

o m g
this is like the best motionless in white fanfic i've ever read
and chris isn't even it and he's like my favourite one
but like omg i sound so basic and illiterate right now because all i can say is oh my god i love this so much you have no idea i just...
WAHHH THIS IS THE BEST THING I'VE EVER READ
AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR DICKS AND BUTTS IN THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!

This is legitimately the best fanfic I've ever read its so adorable and urgh just urgh plus your comments add like, 100 ufdo points you little funny bunny please let this be one of those fics that never really ends

@ feedmeyoursoul
Omg imagine if real Ricky saw this story, he'd be his normal bitchy self times ten
THIS CRAZY FAN HAD BALZ PUT HIS PEE PEE IN MY NO NO SPOT

I'm being totally legit when I say that this is my favorite chapter in the story so far. You don't even understand, this was wonderful. I am looking forward to the dicks!

Ohmygod this was so cute! Your comments always kill me! XD

BUT WATCHING YOU TRYING TO CONJURE UP CUTE ROMANTIC THINGS IS SO HILARIOUS.
but you succeeded.
However, I can't take too much perfect gooey fluffy romantic-ness either. So I'm fine with UFDO's and the like in the next chapter.

That was great!!! I thought it was perfect. I'd be lying if I said I wasn't looking forward to dicks and such in the next chapter. XD

@ feedmeyoursoul