An Alternate Affair - Comments

I had to do a double take when I read the past about the being together for 12 years. I didn't realize that you were jumping ahead so far. Lol.

It was cute and fluffy like a puppy. Lol. But it was good. Madison's real life kids are going to be just like Aiden. Lmao. Good job. Top notch top notch.

Aw, super cute! I was smiling the whole time I was reading.

Tara is super sweet. And of course my kid is a total punk. Gawd. Lol.

Loved it! It was fun reliving this for a few minutes.

Finally!!! he finally gets it! It only took him the entire story to get it, but he finally gets it. I am glad that I got to yell at him though. ;)

Very ironic during the part with Tyler when he was thinking about her running away from their life because she couldn't handle it. And now she has it all again but with someone else.

This was a great chapter. It gave every character closure. You did a great job on this story. I loved it.

I was literally singing the hallelujah chorus when Austin was apologizing to Madison. It only took him seven years. lol

Great chapter. Perfect way to end this story. I liked that it featured all of the main charscters and gave them all closure. Great job!

So, yeah, I so knew that she was gonna be pregnant! DUH!! lol.

I really liked Austin's dream sequence. It's like, in a way he gets it. That what he did was wrong, but in reality he can't admit it. And yay! They're having a baby. That's fun. This has been a really good story. You've done a really good job with it.

And I'm glad that Madison gets to be happy with her man. :)

I knew it! but yay they are going to have the baby they've been wanting. And I loved my happy boyfriend time. I wasn't expecting it in this chapter. Sneaky wife ;)

More soon! I'm kind of sad this is ending, but it's time.

Well duh! Now she's pregnant. And that thought will never cross their minds. Very steamy chapter, of course. I wouldn't expect any less. Lol.

Great chapter. More soon?

Well that was definetely steamy, which I expected. Its cool they went to Paris, very romantic. Will they still be on their honeymoon in the next chapter? Can't wait to read it. Hopefully you'll update faster ;) xxoo

Omg, Morgan and her wine. What a lush. lol

But seriously, amazing chapter! Austin needed to have his ass handed to him. Now he needs to sincerly apologize to Madison. I think thats something that needs to happen so they can have some closure.

More soon! xxoo

Jesus, why do I even bother with him? Even after ask if that, he still didn't ready act like he truly got it. He just said that to shut me up. Whore. Lol.

I loved it. I really loved it. I could just picture sitting there stewing with my wine. I loved the camaraderie with all of the hinder guys and me and tyler. Everything was perfect. Great job, babe.

Oh yeah! Get it, girlfriend. The ladies were kicking ass in this one. Madison gtting angry and getting laid. Morgan getting dishes done. :P and Jacie giving Austin a good ass kicking. He needed it. Lol.

Taylor's proclimation to Madison was beyond sweet. He is just what she neded in her life.

Great chapter. More soon? Xxoo

I really, really liked this chapter. I'm so glad Jackie finally put Austin in his place, and I'm glad that Madison and Taylor are taking the next step of their relationship. I really liked the part with Austin and Aiden. Hopefully this whole situation will turn around his attitude.

More soon! xxoo

I don't think it was horrible. It was sexy. Everyone needs an overly sexual chapter every once in a while. Lol

I'm excited for the wedding. Little do they know its not Madison they have to worry about. Hehe.

Well how very 50 Shades this was ;)

Other than the sex, it was a pretty decent chapter. The wedding should be interesting, but before that I want my man and I to bang! lol. jk kind of...

More soon.

I liked it. Can't wait for the wedding. Should be fun. This was a fun chapter. :)

Aw, I really liked this chapter. I knew they were going to get engaged. I also hope Madison can try to let her gaurd down with Taylor. He seems like a great guy :-) More soon!

You say comments re puppies, well this chapter was puppies. I was smiling the whole time. I think it was good focusing more on Madison and the date rather than the trip to Seaworld. It was entertaining. You really root for her in this story. Maybe even more than Tyler in a way. So this was a great chapter for her character.

I was surprised that the boys actually got up and ready when sh left them. Totally thought they were going to go back to sleep. Or mabe that's just what i would do. Lol

Loved the whole chapter. :)

Really loved this chapter. The new relationship between Madison and Taylor is exciting. And there was shower sex which is always good. lol. But in all seriousness, I really enjoyed it. More soon!

Jackie and Austin confuse me so much. They just have never really grown up. In one breath they talk about having another baby, then in the next she says she's perfectly fine onlu seeing the kid she has twice a month. If she has a baby shs definitely going to se it more than twice a month. Lol.

I just don't think they are mature enough.

But anyways, I liked the chapter. This has been a great story. :)

Vert nice chapter. Austin and Jackie are definetely improving as parents. Idk how their relationship is, considering they still have a hard time communicating. They're totally going to have a baby.

Also, Madison needs to start dating. It's been six years. I'd like her to move on. Also, if this was real, I would have been the one to dye my kids hair cherry red and would have loved it. lol.

Anyways, awesome chapter. Glad to have this story back.