An Alternate Affair - Comments

I love this chapter! It felt very complete, if that makes sense. Like this could have been the last chapter of this story and it would have felt right. I loved the last part with Madison. And the ending. But I loved the whole thing. Even though Austin was a dick through most of it, we finally got a little emotion from him in this one. Like he actually felt something, like he wasn't just completely uncaring about what he did to Madison.

Very good chapter.

Great chapter! it was very emotional. I enjoyed reading about all of Austin's conflicting emotions. It's good to see that he didnt just forget his marriage. And I liked the ending. I hope all of the characters are able to move on and be happy. Very good job, more soon!

Poor baby boy. It sucks when kids get hurt. If I were madison I wouldn't have let him spend the rest of the night. I would have met them in the er and taken my kid home with me. And I was kind of surprised she didn't call and tell tyler.

I liked the beginning when jackie was like, thinking about her mistakes and stuff. That was nice. I loved the whole thing really.

Great chapter. Sorry it took me so long to read. Xxoo

Awww, poor Aiden. I loved the chapter, it was perfect. I really hope Austin can pull his head out of his ass for his son. Jackie and Tyler seem to be making progress which is good. This was really a great chapter. I didnt think you were going to be able to update until thursday, so this was a nice surprise :)

I agree with everything Morgan said. It's infuriating that they fought so hard to get the boys, just to fuck while they slept. I mean, how fun for the boys. And Austin is an ass, but we've already established that. lol. It was a really good chapter. I always enjoy reading this one, it sucks me in to the point where I'm now very emotionally invested. lol. More soon!

Well your point was made, they aren't vet good p parents. And you know, I thought Jackie did good with tyler. She want like, hateable, id that's a word. I'm pretty sure its not, but you know what I'm saying. Austin however, was such an ass to madison. Grrr. How date he speak to her like that?!

But no, I mean, they worked so hard and made such a big deal that they deserved to have their kids, they could at least keep it in their pants for a night to be with their kids.

Great job!

Omg, amazing chapter! Austin is such a dick! omg. If I was tyler, I would have killed him. The whole wedding was such a disaster. The part with Morgan and I dancing was perfect. Awesome chapter. More soon!

The beginning part with Morgan and I was so us and so perfect. I really loved the whole chapter. Obviously it's not a good idea to go to the wedding. In fact it's horrible.

The shopping part was cute though. :)

My sister is such a good writer. This was so good and true to her. I could imagine her saying every bit of it. I could hear her voice, even when I read it the first time. It made me feel like I was there, standing right next to her. You both did very good on this part of the chapter. I loved it.

Austin is such an asshole, I cant even believe it. Tyler had every right to kick his ass, and im glad he did. Omg, this was so intense! This was probably one of my favorite chapters of this whole thing. So amazing. I loved the part with Tyler apologizing to me. He's so sweet, and he felt bad. Poor guy

Great chapter. Loved it a lot.

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Lol. I loved it. I loved the begining with Madison and I talking and stuff. My weird neurotic worrying. Lol. And our little phrase. :)

I'm preparing for dramain next couple chapters. My favorite.

I'm on Tyler's side. I think he had every right to yell at her. And she really had no right to put everything on Austin's shoulders either. She knew exactly what she was doing, and has no one to blame but herself for everything she is getting now. Chrissy had a lot of good points though. But in my opinion Jackie gave up her right to want to take care of her son. And I'm with with Madison in her comment that I don't see Austin and Jackie lasting. Those kinds of relationships rarely do.

Great chapter. Really loved it.

This was a very big chapter. I was so pissed at her for calling Ty and just expe ting him to let her talk to the baby and not yell at her. He more than has that right. The part with Chrissy was good and she made some very good points. I can also see Austin and Jackie's relationship falling apart soon. It's obvious they only feel lust for each other and have mistaken that for love. Anywho, great chapter. More soon!

great chapter! it was very full, and gave great perspective from everyone involved. i loved my part with my sexy man. ;) its nice that madison and tyler can turn to each other.
the part with austin and jackie talking about having kids bugged me. like it just didnt really bother them too much, and they could just have replacement kids if they wanted.
but overall a wonderful chapter. cant wait for more! xxoo

The end was great, very sad. It was a really good chapter even if it was just a filler. Can't wait for the next chapter. I really like this story :) More soon!

My heart is just broken for Tyler and Madison. :( And those poor babies. I was angry when Austin was thinking that it was alright. It's not alright. It's horrible. I feel so bad for them.

But moving on to Austin and Jackie. Them living in the hotel room and stuff made me think of that one story I wrote with Matty in it. There is something very romantic about just living in the moment like that. Not caring about where you are or whats going on around you, as long as you're with that other person.

Great chapter. More soon?

Great chapter! I was sad for Tyler. I'm glad that him and Madison are going to be there for eaxh other. I think thats great. I really dont understand how Austin thinks they should let them see the kids again. It's strange to me how they can truely justify what they are doing. idk. I loved the chapter thoigh! more soon!

I'm so mad at them. I've never read a story where I truly disliked the main characters and what they're doing. How could they do that? And poor Madison and Tyler, and those poor babies. Those two had to dig so deep to forgive Jackie and Austin and now they're going behind their backs and doing it again. And Jackie almost acts like its all Tyler's fault or something.

The ending was so sad. :(

Omg the last part made me sad. I'm like all mad at them because they're leaving. It's just so horrible. I don't even know how they can do this to their kids. :( But, the chapter was awesome. This story is awesome. More soon!

This was different than I thought it was going to be, in a good way. The emotions were spot on, with Austin and Jackie, and with Madison and Tyler and all of the denial and conflicting emotions they are having. It's strange to think that this story could have been so different if they had continued the affair. It's very interesting. More soon!