EEEEEEEHHH!!!!! This makes me super excited to see what happens next. You always keep me on the edge. This is such a great story. I have nothing but praise.
I'm super happy you updated!! This was a really good filler. The fact Hayley is always on the look out makes me love her more. You're doing an excellent job! Keep it up. :)
I'm super happy you updated!! This was a really good filler. The fact Hayley is always on the look out makes me love her more. You're doing an excellent job! Keep it up. :)
I love this side of Hayley she is all confident and bossy but elegant at the same time, *raise my hand* I think Hayley is goin to go to the abandoned building in a few chapters from now, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
I have this strange feeling tht Kyle is working for the Joker and is being his inside guy on Hayley like gettin Hayley to trust Kyle and once she trusts him, he invites her to dinner one day but secretly gets her kidnapped by the Joker and he comes up with an excuse like he is goin to go inside the restaurant to see how long the wait is and once he goes inside Joker's goons snatches her and take her away as Kyle watches from the inside.....thts my theroy on Kyle, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
The summary really pulled me into your story, and I really loved the layout because it flowed well with the story. Your chapters were full of detail and description which was great and it kept me interested. This is an awesome idea for a story and I would love to read more about it :) Keep on writing, you’re good at it.
Definitely don't hate you! Your a good writer and you know what your doing. If this is what you wanna do so that the story is better then that's totally fine! And it was a good chapter even though it was shorter than usual = ). Can't wait for the next one!! Keep up the good work.