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  • Death_to_Roses

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    I KNEW it! That DICK!
    October 13th, 2012 at 03:32am
  • MoMo_92

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    Haha yes I knew it!!!!! Do I get a cookie or something I prefer a cookie cuz it's delicious, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    October 12th, 2012 at 11:19pm
  • MoMo_92

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    Love it, Hayley is hilarious and determined to kill the Joker, will she succeed or fail, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    October 11th, 2012 at 01:06am
  • MoMo_92

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    Mmmmm Hayley trust Kyle enough to ask him to help her in search of the Joker, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    October 9th, 2012 at 03:00am
  • CandyAppleRed

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    EEEEEEEHHH!!!!! This makes me super excited to see what happens next. You always keep me on the edge. This is such a great story. I have nothing but praise. Mr. Green
    October 9th, 2012 at 01:37am
  • Alsoldey

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    There's nothing wrong with heart-felt chapters, as I like to call them, and I seriously love your details and writing<3
    October 8th, 2012 at 06:04am
  • CandyAppleRed

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    I'm super happy you updated!! This was a really good filler. The fact Hayley is always on the look out makes me love her more. You're doing an excellent job! Keep it up. :)
    October 7th, 2012 at 08:13pm
  • CandyAppleRed

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    I'm super happy you updated!! This was a really good filler. The fact Hayley is always on the look out makes me love her more. You're doing an excellent job! Keep it up. :)
    October 7th, 2012 at 08:13pm
  • Jamie :3

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    I was so happy, when I saw that you updated.! :)

    Like always, another lovely update. :D

    Keep it up. C:
    October 7th, 2012 at 03:14am
  • MoMo_92

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    Love it, Kyle is soo kind but I'm still on to him tho Grr love this story it's great cant wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    October 7th, 2012 at 02:07am
  • CandyAppleRed

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    This chapter is one of my favorites. I like how she toyed with the mob a bit. This is deffinatly an interseting side to Hayley. Mr. Green

    Oh and good luck on you test. You will do great!
    October 5th, 2012 at 01:39am
  • MoMo_92

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    I love this side of Hayley she is all confident and bossy but elegant at the same time, *raise my hand* I think Hayley is goin to go to the abandoned building in a few chapters from now, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    October 2nd, 2012 at 02:58am
  • Alsoldey

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    Good luck with the writing assessment! Great update! I like this sde of her too!
    October 1st, 2012 at 11:46pm
  • imdancingalone

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    I love this story :) It's so well written! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
    October 1st, 2012 at 10:00am
  • MoMo_92

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    Love it, damn Hayley is pissed the hell off tht she can kill Bruce if she put her mind to it, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    October 1st, 2012 at 07:41am
  • Alsoldey

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    You bloody great writer!! Let me love you!
    October 1st, 2012 at 12:43am
  • Jamie :3

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    I'm quite interested on who this Kyle person is, and what will happen with this new character. :)

    As always, awesome update, keep it going. :D
    September 30th, 2012 at 04:28am
  • MoMo_92

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    I have this strange feeling tht Kyle is working for the Joker and is being his inside guy on Hayley like gettin Hayley to trust Kyle and once she trusts him, he invites her to dinner one day but secretly gets her kidnapped by the Joker and he comes up with an excuse like he is goin to go inside the restaurant to see how long the wait is and once he goes inside Joker's goons snatches her and take her away as Kyle watches from the inside.....thts my theroy on Kyle, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    September 30th, 2012 at 02:44am
  • Livelaughlove1221

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    Comment swap brought me here:

    The summary really pulled me into your story, and I really loved the layout because it flowed well with the story. Your chapters were full of detail and description which was great and it kept me interested. This is an awesome idea for a story and I would love to read more about it :) Keep on writing, you’re good at it.

    (P.S. I don't hate you xD)
    September 29th, 2012 at 06:56pm
  • snodgrassrules

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    Definitely don't hate you! Your a good writer and you know what your doing. If this is what you wanna do so that the story is better then that's totally fine! And it was a good chapter even though it was shorter than usual = ). Can't wait for the next one!! Keep up the good work.
    September 29th, 2012 at 09:26am