In Death They Rise - Comments

I like it! It's building up, i can't wait until you update some more and we find out how this all happened? Also will we find out what happened to the older sis? You're a great writer!

Keep going I like it.

This story is just really amazing. The layout is intense and easy to read, although I might suggest making the font a few sizes smaller. I like the dark theme of it, and it's so fitting to the story! It gives off the perfect vibe.
The grammar and spelling was flawless. I didn't see one mistake, and it makes the story a smooth read and forms a great "first impression." haha.
More importantly, the plot and details are wonderful! There's not much to say about the plot, because it's a zombie apocolypse and it's pretty classic. Sometimes, people put spins on it, and it doesn't really help, but this just stuck to the originality and you built it with your writing style to make it your own!
I love all the characters, and I think they have very interesting personalities. The detail is just fabulous, and I think the words you use are so unique and different when you describe things. You have the perfect balance!

Great job with the story! :)