I found this story today and I am so glad I did. This is by far on of the best James Neal stories that I have ever read. I really love the way you made their relationship progress, it wasn't meet and get to it, it was perfect. I cannot wait for the next chapter!
Wow, I haven't been able to read this for a long time :\
I finally got all caught up just now and I must say, I absolutely love how James' and Alayna's relationship has gradually progressed. I always love when these type of relationships start off with two people who seemingly can't stand each other, only to evolve into something beautiful (I know, it's corny). I thought it was hilarious how she was freaking out that James had just been a one night stand who left her stranded across the border by herself. Not to mention how you put in the detail of James making scrambled eggs for breakfast, because honestly, that seems like the only thing he knows how to make lol.
I also love how they have such great chemistry together, especially during the hot tub scene because that was really hot, not going to lie haha. And that ending was so sweet! She was able to admit her feelings for him even though it was probably really hard for her to do and how they just smile at each other, ugh! So precious :3