Charmed Life - Comments

Hahaha, I was literally laughing out loud by the end of this! I really liked the way you brought these two back together. Lanie's inner monologuing is hilarious. Can't wait for more!

Oh shit.

Realized I forgot to comment on this latest chapter!

James questioning if Ovechkin sent her was hilarious. There was some good bantering back and forth, and I liked the frantic thoughts going through her head. Seamed very realistic which is always nice. I can't wait to see what you come up with to get them back together again!

I love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter

"Did Ovechkin send you?"

I know this is supposed to be a serious story, but I laughed way harder than I should have haha. I actually like the idea for this story, it's very different. Can't wait for the next chapter :]

Wow, part of me wants James to find her and part of me wants her to run away. I do hope he doesn't call the cops, though, she seems harmless

Ooh...looking forward to the next chapter!

cant wait for the next chapter!

I like this. I really like this. *subscribes*

This is actually a pretty neat interesting idea for a fic, she is like Goldilocks I hope James doesn't get too upset, she seems harmless

This is really good.

So in real life this would be horrifying, but in the realm of fiction I am finding this hilarious. She's like a real life Goldilocks. I was literally lol-ing. Good stuff and I can't wait for more!

i already like where this story is going! keep updating please? :)