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HEEEEELLLOOOOO. I haven't been on this website in forever, but I'm slowly coming back <3
And I read this today and it was beautiful. ^_^

I read Kate's comment, and I agree with the conversation about Zayn being a bit confusing. But....other than that I was pleasantly reminded of how incredible your writing is. And I'm excited about where the plot is heading!!!

Favorite Line: His clothes were disheveled and his hair was more wild than usual, sticking up around his head like a halo, making him look like a cherub.

That was such a great description. :)

Okay, the whole conversation about Zayn possibly liking Liam was kind of disjointed. I had to read it five times before I figured what Diana was actually hinting at. And did Louis hint that Zayn had a crush on all of them? Um... like what. ZAYN IS NOT A WHORE LOUIS STOP ITTT.

Also, is this really the time to be talking about sexual orientation? Isn't there a big bad out there that needs to be killed. THERE IS NO TIME FOR GAY TALK.

After speaking about Zayn, you should probably mention that when you use the pronoun "he", you're talking about Louis. I just got really confused and wondered when Zayn magically got the power to heal. Although, I kind of wondered the same thing about Louis because I can't remember what his power was supposed to be.

Other than that, this was a good next installment, even if it confused the hell out of me because I don't remember any of it. Hahaha.

Ah, you sure do put me on a pedestal. I don't deserve any of that praise. But thanks anyway. Hahaha.

I just read this and I love it- I know this aaa 9 months ago but please update

Wooowowowowowowow. I think I might be crying. Why the crap do you do this to me REBECCAAAAAAAAA. *sobs*

I..Iii...I just......can't . It's always torture because this story is so intricate and complex with everyone's special talents and the stuff that happens and I can't wait to read more and find out more of the plot and stuff fgbrueouhdscvjbgrouw

Your language is as always vbfhgoeiqjlaksdcnvujohgiejfahsou MOCHA NUT FUDGE CHOCOLATEY PERFSHMEXY. I don't know what I'm saying, all I know is that my brain was done after it read that cerulean pool line. I think it's broken. ..... hahahahaha

And if it wasn't broken, it broke when you started describing Louis and all those cdjbshfoeijlakndcsvfbughoieqflandchufei bruises on himmmmmmmm STTOOOPPPP. Rebecca WHY. Goodbye. :P

I adore this story.
It keeps me guessing and I love that I actually try to predict what will happen next.
Can't wait for the nect update!

Wow. I forgot how much I loved this layout. Hahaha.

uha;djfdsn;fjasdf ZAYN IS SO WHINY. Hahahaha.

"Disturbing the placid pools of cerulean." WHAAAT. Hahaha. That is freaking beautiful.

WHAAAAT. Oh my God, Diana's a badass. Hahahaha. Look at that.

WORDS WILL BE JUST WORDSSSS TIL YOU BRING THEM TO LIFEEEE. Hahaha.

AS COMBATIVE AS A BABY PENGUIN I CAN'T.

Poor babies were totally walloped. Hahaha. Oh, dear.

...What the hell happened at the end...? Hahaha.

This is very interesting :o
I hope nothing bad happens :(

vfbuhoijp;fedcnvsfk YOU NEED TO FIXX THEMM THIS IS NOT OKAY REBECCAAAAA :'(

I just realized....THE ZOUIS.

nvfhorjfilhguorwijl his toned muscles. HIS TONES MUSCLES?!?!?!?!?!?!?! *le dies*

YES. I LIKE WHAT I SEE.

Zayn can read minds. AH. Although I already figured that.

And Louis can see the future?

Niall is able to influence emotions and use them to his advantage, Zayn can read minds, Louis can see the future, I feel like I'm reading Twilight all over again, except the writing's actually good.

YES LOUIS CAN TELL THE FUTURE I KNEW IT I WIN ^_^

fohidlsvnfgeoiwljndhvubfrwil NO YOU CAN'T DO THIS I HATE YOU DON'T KILL THEM

vfhuojdoihe Liam's powers have to effect on her it is Twilight I knew it.

Weelll, at least there isn't a bad cliff hanger. THANK YOU. :P And as always, YOUR BEAUTIFUL WRITING IS BEAUTIFUL. :D KEEP GOIN GIRL. <3

WHAT ON EARTH?! SUPER POWERS?! SPECIAL POWERS?! WHAT ON EARTH?!?! GIRL PLEASE. GIIIRL PLEEEASE! I DON'T EVEN CARE BECAUSE I LOVE THIS SO MUCH AND I CAN'T EVEN ANYTHING RIGHT NOW BECAUSE THAT WAS FREAKING AMAZING AND OH GOD, REBECCA, I LOVE YOU SO MUCH YOU'RE SO TALENTED AND BEAUTIFUL.

LOUISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS. YOU BEAUTIFUL SOUL.

"And that there" That's so hick to me. I'm, like, crying, picturing some southern dude saying it. Hahahaha.

So what if they don't want to be friends at all, yet they have to because Liam wanted them all to be? Just some food for thought.

LOUIS FREAKING TELL THEM RIGHT NOW BEFORE SOMEONE HAS A CONNIPTION.

...LOUIS DIDN'T NO ONE EVER TELL YOU TO KEEP YOUR MOUTH SHUT BOY LORD.

HAHAHAHAHA. ZAYN. I CAN'T sfajiodfhui;jksdafbasdhfibasd; THAT'S MY BOY, WITH HIS COMPLAINING.

His hair was fighting to be its natural brown. That's way nicer than saying, "Ooooo child your roots are a hooot mess."

huajsdfndsfjkafs;j HAHAHAHA. I was like, "Whoa, Liam, what's wrong with Niall's laughing...YOU'RE RUDE GOODBYE." But then I realized he meant the powers so um yeah bye.

This chapter was bomb. And awwww, girl, you make me blush. Heh heh. GIRL YOU SHOULD UPDATE ALL THE TIME GOODBYE.

I swear.. onlythegooddieyoung and SassMastaFromDonny leave these super long comments and then, there's my 3 worded one saying I love it...
:P

ZAYN THAT WAS RUDE GAWD WHY DID YOU SCUURR HER LIKE THAT.

Hahahahaha giving away secrets. He's really a big teddy bear.

Zany hahahahaha nicknamessss

Their play fighting IS SO CUTE *dead*

.................Except for when Louis drops dead............... :O

That paragraph with Zayn's tattoos. Oh HONEEEYYY. Beautiful.

Nonononononononnononono YOU NEED TO FIX LOUIS AHHOORAAAAAAAAAAA. I will boycott this story until you do. :P

I like yo' face. And yo' chapter. And yo' whole being.

I LOVE this chapter. I just do. Diana's cool. The real person and the character. WOO.

ZAYN IN THIS CHAPTER DOH. OH LAWWWWD. (Dunno if you got that far in the book, but honey badger simply DO NOT care). I loved how kind of...maternal (I know, he a dude, but whatever) he was in taking care of Diana. AND GOOD FREAKING LAWWWWWWWD, your description of him was beautiful. My heart died. And then it came back to life and sobbed. And then it died again.

LOUISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS. POOR BABAYYY. That part with him and Zen was funny tee hee.

WHOA ZAYN CAN READ MINDS OOOO CHILD I HOPE HE DON'T READ MINE LOL JUST KIDDINGGGGGG.

Also, that man better stay away before I turn into a samurai and chop off certain parts of his anatomy with a sword. >:)

So good! In your writing, you can really feel the emotions of the characters. Love it. Update soon!

AGH! YOU updated! Thank you so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so much! This chapter was amazing and beautifully written! Thank you for updating I jsut love this story so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so much! :)

This chapter was wonderful
And usually by now I would be guessing what would happen next but honestly I have no clue...
I'm thinking that Louis may have some kind of mindreading power or something of the sort but as for the other boys and the man with the scar I have no idea what to expect!
Ugh this story is absolutely fantastic though.
I hope your next update comes soon! <3

This chapter was wonderful
And usually by now I would be guessing what would happen next but honestly I have no clue...
I'm thinking that Louis may have some kind of mindreading power or something of the sort buy as for the other boys and the man with the scar I have no idea what to expect!
Ugh this story is absolutely fantastic though.
I hope your next update comes soon! <3

This is amazing!!!! I can't wait for more!!!!!!! ❤❤❤

LOUIS IS SICK?!?!?!? MY BABY IS SICK!??!!?!?! Freaking out, freaking out somebodycall911. hiuorhgnjffklsuailhguedjilsjfdhsrgi

Hahahahahahahahahahahaha

Dear Rebecca,
CAN YOU NOT? Why do you constantly have to show everyone up with your elegant writing? HHMMM????? :P

"The sanitary porcelain bowl" I've never heard a toilet described so beautifully in my life. Okay? Okay.



Yes, I did just use that GIF.

I love the intense suspense about what's wrong with Louis, and the way all three of them (Louis, Diana, and Harry) interacted with each other in this chapter. It was superb. All Hail Rebecca Pereira the Legendary Writer.

AND THE ENDING WAS...WAS....JUST FLAT OUT PERFEXY.
I CHANGED MY MIND I WANT TO MARRY THIS CHAPTER INSTEAD. ACTUALLY, I WILL VIRTUALLY MOVE TO UTAH AND MARRY ALL OF YOUR CHAPTERS THE END.

Your writing is superb!
Don't let anyone else tell you otherwise, even if it is your parents.
Amazing chapter!!
very curious to see what is going on with Louis.