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Comment Swapper, hello! Okay, so a Jack story! Yes! I like where you're going with this! Especially Jack's randomness and it's well written :D It's a little short for my liking, but other than that, great story so far! :D

Comment swap sent me here also. the dialogue is awesome. YAY! A Jack story. OMG! This story really good. Though we are in the first chapter. Wendy is calm and collected with the fact that being pregnant at such a young age. I really want to know how she and Jack met. How did she and jack get together or is the baby not his and she just say it is?

Comment Swap brought me here. And I am SO glade it did!
Where do I ever start!? First of all, I LOVE the layout, and the title is really interesting. Your dialogue is amazing, it's something I can only wish of being able to do. The names for everyone are very good, I would actually LOVE some tips on coming up with original names. Some tips on improving my dialogue would be really great too! I will be subscribing! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Keep up the great writing!

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You honestly have a great imagnation when it comes to dialogue, and your writing abilites aren't to shaby eitheir. :)

It's only the first the first chapter and I'm hooked,definately subscribing. I'm not really all that big on All Time Low, but this is one of the scarce fics I'm can't help to get into.

Oh, and by the way, I really like your story layout, simplistic, vintage, and very chic. :)

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You honestly have a great imagnation when it comes to dialogue, and your writing abilites aren't to shaby eitheir. :)

It's only the first the first chapter and I'm hooked,definately subscribing. I'm not really all that big on All Time Low, but this is one of the scarce fics I'm can't help to get into.

Oh, and by the way, I really like your story layout, simplistic, vintage, and very chic. :)

Uhm, I got a bit confused with who was saying who, but after a few re-reads I think I got it:)

I love All Time Low, and I love Jack :3 So, naturally, I think I'm going to like this story :) You right well, even though it's a small chapter and generally speaking I'm a fan of longer chapters .
However, the story seems pretty interesting already :D I'd love to read more :)

oh wow. only the first chapter and it is funny. (I'm here from comment swap.) Amazing chapter even though it was somewhat short. Seems like this story will be quite interesting. also i didn't see any mistakes.

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It's probably my fault, but it took me two times to read this chapter. XD Gah, I'm tired. Anyways, I'm not a fan of the band that Jack is in. However, this story sounds like it will be interesting.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHABAHAHAHAHAHAA I WAS LAUGHING SO HARD. I'm really looking forward to this, update soon!