Close Enough to Hurt Me - Comments

LOVE IT!! This story is so great, and I just can't get enough of Brian and his arrogance!!
And beach day? I sense disaster, well at least if there's games and Sarah. xx

ha, I cant wait till the each. I have a feeling that Brian is going to get a lot more than he bargained for while giving surfing lessons, unless the power of his charm starts to win Lyndsey over. That would be something. Im hoping for more quick wit though and Brians arrogance because it is very entertaining!!! Update soon please:)

Don't fuck up again Brian, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Lalalalalalove this! Update soon, doll!

Ruh roh. A beach party? I smell drama and hilarity!
I can't WAIT for you to update again.
Hint, hint. ;)

Oh this is going to be hilarious!!! I feel like Brian is going to get another lashing. And I can't wait to see how she handles it.
<3 Michele

Please please update, your writing is fantastic and I really want to read more.! This story is great s far:)

It's so hard when your best friend is one of those people who can talk to anyone and is always in the middle of fun, while you're on the outside... just kind of watching on. I was like that when I was younger, my best friend was all was the hit of the party, whilst I tended to shy away to the wall and just watch everyone else have a great time. It sucked, but had it's advantages. You learn a lot when you people watch

“We are that fucking fantasy...”

He's really not helping himself, is he? I mean, just out of principle the girl would have to deny that statement, even if it was true... nobody should be that conceited... at least not out loud. Sure, he can think, but man... don't say it. You just look like a complete wanker! A very unattractive wanker. Hahaha.

Well, whilst I understand her outburst at Brian's advances... she really could've handled that situation with a lot more tact and discretion. I mean, screaming at him and making a scene as she did was kind of uncalled for... it's not like he tried to actually make a move on her and kiss her, but I suppose I understand why she reacted the way she did. However I do feel bad for Sarah, because even with Lyndsey's issues, that wasn't fair on her at all. It's a shame she couldn't keep her cool and exit with a little more grace than she did, but oh well. I'm sure Sarah will get over it.

“Ah, you underestimated King Dick,” Johnny chuckled and gestured at Brian, who was still staring at the spot Lyndsey had once occupied as if someone had just slapped him with a fish. “He has the power to piss off the calmest of people.”

Oh, that entire paragraph tickled me pink! Not only do I love Johnny for calling Brian 'King Dick', but you also got me with the description of said 'King Dick's' expression... bahahahaha! Well done!

Zacky shrugged, a boyish smile curving his lips as he slipped his hands in his pockets.

That gives me the best mental image of him... I have to say I'm horribly jealous of Sarah right now. Lucky lil thing!

I didn’t see why I couldn’t trust Zacky when he said he didn’t usually do this.

Aww, hun, you sweet, innocent little girl... personally, if a guy said that to me, I'd take it with a grain of salt and believe the opposite. But hopefully Zacky is being genuine and doesn't do anything to hurt her... it's the last thing the poor girl needs.

Well, I hope Zacky's and Sarah's date goes well, those two are just too damn cute. Although I'm not to sure how Lyndsey will feel about it, since she has issues with musicians and therefore wouldn't be overly approving of her best friend dating one. Especially her best friend that has had a recent bad break up. But hopefully she steps aside and lets Sarah make her own choices, because I'm sure if she didn't, it would cause a rift in their friendship... and we don't want that!

Great update and I'm looking forward to more

Hahaha loved it! Lyndsey and Sarah are so funny! I just don't think that Sarah should stay mad at Lyndsey, it was Brian who caused the whole situation, which by the way, I loved it xD
Waiting for the next chapter ;)

Ohh snap she let Brian have it haha!!! I so love this story so far, I can't wait to see what you do with it

The whole "guppy" bit with Brian was hilarious! I love Lyndsey! She's hilarious! Please update soon n.n

I don't see how Sarah is mad/angry at Lyndsey I mean she knew how she felt about musicians tht one and two Lyndsey tried so hard to not blow up but Syn being the cocky son of a bitch he is didnt kno when to stop so she snapped and I'm glad tht she held on for this long before she exploded so yea Sarah u can get over it and suck it up and be glad tht she went with u in the first place, tht the guys understand the situation and tht Zacky is willing to hang out with u after tht blow up, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I'm actually quite proud of Lyndsey for sticking up for herself in this chapter. Brian was being somewhat of a douche. Zacky seems oh so sweet though. :) loved the update dear.

I am an asshole.

But I'm kind of an awesome asshole so it's okay.

I LOVED THIS! I couldn't stop laughing, it was perfect. And Zacky's so cute. I'm so, so, so excited to see what happens next! <3

YES! I was laughing the entire way through Lyndsey's freak out on Brian. That was gold! It seemed like he needed to be put into his place. And OH he sure was!

And Zacky and Sarah moment! It was absolutely adorable! Adorable I tell you! Zacky's such a smooth operator. Nowhere near like douchey Brian over there.

I LOVED the update! It was absolutely amazing! I can't wait to read more! <3

Hahahaha, Oh god, I LOVED how she completely owned him. I have met a few guys like him, obviously not even close to his status, but still just as infuriating, so I totally got why she snapped.

“If you just let me, I’ll show you exactly why I’m every girls fantasy.”....I wonder how many times he has used that line in real life? I doubt he even has to speak, probably just has to motion for them to follow him and its a done deal.., must get boring, grls just falling at their feet like that...sigh. Still, all of his lines, especially the, "I have nothing to be humble about" stuff cracked me up...arrogant Brian is very very entertaining, I hope he makes an appearance again very soon!

This chapter was awesome! I loved the ending, with Zacky being all cute! I cant wait to see what will happen, I'm sure Mr. Haner wont easily forget the girl who shut him down.....I need More! Update quickly please, this story is just so good:)

bahahaha. you tell him lyndsey, make him work for it.

May I just say how much I loved Lyndsey's outburst, that was brilliant! I also still adore arrogant Brian, it's just so funny! This whole story is brilliant!
Love it =) xx

Lol. I am so happy about Lyndsey telling off Brian! It seemed harsh, but I'm pretty sure he deserved it. haha. Sarah is adorable, enuff said, adn I am very happy for her and how she gave Zacky her number.
<3 Michele

please update! I love this story so much already!