Close Enough to Hurt Me - Comments

hahaa oh god that last bit of speech! big headed much!? hope lyndsey pushes him off the sofa! loooooooove this! you must must update again soon :D

YES FINALLY CAUGHT UP!

Oh my gosh yes! I love this! Absolutely perfect. I can't help but to laugh the entire time. Oh goodness you and Lyndsey together, backstage with A7X. That actually sounds really disastrous. Add Taylor and me... well I don't know if that's a party or the apocalypse haha. I love how the guys are all a bit cocky and Lyndsey isn't going to take their crap. I love this! <33

Naw, Sarah is so damn cute. Her excitement to go to the concert and backstage afterwards mirrors my own when I'm heading off the see the boys. It's even more fun when the people you're going with are just as excited as you are, but it's understandable why Lyndsey wouldn't be... besides, I think Sarah had enough hyperness for the both of them

“Maybe. And if we’re really lucky, pigs might fly out of my ass.”

And they say childbirth is painful... I'm thinking that would hurt more. Hahaha.

But to all these screaming people, the lunatic beside me included, these guys were like gods.

Bahahaha! Harsh, but so true... feeling the love for her best friend. Hahaha.

“I’m definitely getting too old for this crap.”

Totally agree with her there. Whilst I'm a fan of mosh pits and the ambiance they bring to a show, I've realised that these days I'm so much better off up the back in a seat or standing somewhere I can actually breathe... and see what's going on on the stage. Being only 5'5, unless I'm right up front in a mosh pit, I don't see a lot. So I've come to realise I'm not cut out for the pits anymore. Hahaha.

“This in general? Most girls would do anything to be here. Or rather do anyone.”

Although it seems extremely cocky and conceited, I can't help but point out the fact that he is right. Hahaha. Most girls would do anything to be where those two are... hell, I'm pretty sure there's even a good number of guys that would too. I mean, it is Avenged Sevenfold. Hahaha.

Absolutely loved the update and really can't wait to read more. I just know Brian is more than capable of making this night even worse for the poor girl... not to mention her day to day life

I had the biggest smile on my face reading this chapter! I loved it!! X

Omg i soooo love this story! The first chapter made me love this story. I cannot wait to see what you do with this!!!! Xoxo :)

Sarah's character makes me laugh so much, and then add Lyndsey's kind of sarcastic/mock Sarah comments its like a dream team! I love it!
The whole chapter was incredible as ever, I do enjoy arrogant Synyster Gates!!! Brilliant. xx

Just for the record... I would pay lots of money to see pigs fly out of Lyndsey's ass. Talk about entertainment.
Heh, Lyndsey is so harsh in this, it cracks me up. I'm just so in love with this story already, so you should update Broken Wings really soon so you can update this really soon. Kthnx. :)

bahahaha omg synester you cocky bastard.
i love it.

Oh SYn being the cocky prick! How fitting :D Lyndsey and Syn are NOT going to be good friends, but it should make for entertaining times :)
<3 Michele

Love it, oh Syn u little arrogant man (how I love you soo ) anyhoo I wonder if Lydnesy is goin to tell the band and mainly Syn her reason, anyhoo can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Oh man! You can't end it there! I really love thier friendship and the fact that Jason berry got a cameo in this. Lol. So Brian is a wee bit arrogant, I like it. I could definately see him being a bit of a shit head, but I mean that in the kindest way possible. Lol. Can't wait for more! It's starting to really pick up:)

This made me laugh out loud: "And if we're really lucky, pigs might fly out of my ass."

LOVE THIS! Even though I kind of want to slap myself for not being excited to be there. What kind of person am I?! But yes. I did love this. Update soon please! <3

This is awesome so far. I am legitimately excited for this story!haha favourite line in here by far-'I’m not asking you to date one of them or to jump on their good thing and do the bad thing.' ..I laughed for real when I ready that. I can see why she wouldnt like musician after what her father did, but im excited for her to go to this concert! I wish I could win tickets to their show with backstage access! That is the stuff with which dreams are made of my friend:) More soon please!

I love it!!! This is going to be an incredible story, I can not wait for more!
The start was so powerful, and then you managed to have me in fits of laughter "Who needs a boyfriend when you have a Sarah?" Damn right!
Beautiful! xx

this is breathtaking.
=]

love this! it's really, really good so far. can't wait to see what happens when the avenged boys come into the picture. ;)

by the way, you're a great writer. :)

Loved it!! Cant wait for next chapter!! xx

The beginning of this story almost made me cry. It was very sad and so beautifully written that I felt as if I was going through her parents break up myself. When she hugged her mother, it was just such a bittersweet moment that brought a tear to my eye. Well done.

The shift to the present time was done seamlessly and again, I felt like I was walking around dead tired myself. There's nothing worse than just wanting to fall into bed but it feels like an eternity before you can reach that goal. It's painful. Hahaha.

Sarah seems like a very sweet character, too. I love that she cooked her favourite meal and dessert just to ask her to tag along to a concert... I mean, I understand Lyndsey's apprehension to do so because of her father, but still, it's just a concert. It seems a little silly to let your past experience with musicians prevent you from going to a show. Sarah said it best:

"...I’m not asking you to date one of them or to jump on their good thing and do the bad thing."

Definitely my favourite line of the chapter. Hahaha. I'm glad she decided to give it a chance, even if it's just to appease her best friend. After all, that's what friends do!

Anyways, great start to the story and I'm looking forward to reading more as it comes

This is amazing! Please update as soon as possible love! <3

Okay, now I can properly comment on this. I absolutely love this. That little memory was so sad, and so like...vivid, if that even makes sense (who really knows, I'm dead tired and can't think straight but moving right along). I just simply love everything about this first chapter! Such a great way to open a story, and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Favorite line: "Who needs a boyfriend when you've got a Sarah?" Amen, sister!