What Lies Within - Comments

I"m happy with it! Draco's so cute in the last paragraph. :) I didn't expect Harry to say anything in the defense of Draco, glad he did. Can't wait for more :)

Love it, anyhoo I wonder what Sophia is goin to show Draco at the Room of Requirement and I think Sophia should take Harry's advice and accept Draco's apology I mean she knew tht she had to capture Harry since she joined the group so obviously there is nothing to get mad at Draco for when he was just following orders and she knew tht if they showed up empty handed tht they would possibly be in trouble, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

@ JacqulineRenee
I'm from Washington State too

I just began reading this, I like it(: and I saw your comment about Washington State, I'm from there(:

Poor Sophie she feels betrayed by Draco,make Draco u r in big trouble with Sophie it's not even funny she is goin to be giving u the silent treatment from hell, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Aww so cute :3 Can't wait for more :)

Too cute!

that was the sweetest way for draco to ask sophie to be his girlfriend, i'm dying on the inside

Awwww super cute, he asked her to be his and she said yes, finally took him long enough, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Love it, yay Draco tells Sophie and they ended up making out, thts hot I think Draco should be a mr romantic and ask Sophie to be his girlfriend in the most sweetest way ever, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

yeah...Sophie's mom really has a weird taste for men
But to what matters...
AWWWWWW finally! Best chapter ever
I just can't get enough of this story so please please please update again when you can this is getting even better by the chapter!

What the hell?!?!?!?! Seriously Sophie's mom wanted to her husband to be killed cuz she didn't love him anymore seriously and thn she falls for tht freaky looking snake man thing gross *vomits* can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

ARGH!!!!!!!!!!! seriously a cliffhanger omg what the hell?!?!!!?!?!!?!?!?!?! Can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

ARGH!!!!!!!!!!! seriously a cliffhanger omg what the hell?!?!!!?!?!!?!?!?!?! Can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Maaaan, your updates seriously make my day (night, whatever)!
I have to agree with the waitress, Sophie and Draco are indeed a cute couple
So...what I think they've seen in the living room... at first I thought her mother was also killed, but then I re-read the chapter (first time is always speed reading ) and saw they had heard voices there...a murderer (or murderers) wouldn't be that stupid to stay there in the crime scene talking, or would they? So my guess is that maybe Voldy took over her family Manor like he did to the Malfoy's later...but this fact itself still doesn't explain why her father was killed... all I know is that I'm officially dying to read the next chapter.
And thanks for taking some time to update this story since you must be busy with all the move stuff and all, it's very much appreciated .

I think tht Draco should like tell Sophie when they r hanging out with each other tht she is the girl tht he is crazy about, anyhoo love this story, I think Lord Voldermort killed Sophie's dad, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I love the story so much! I love how they have their problems and some how they changed. Please update soon!!

I absolutely love your portrayal of Draco in this story! It’s really just wonderful! And I absolutely love watching him and Sophie react. It’s just so witty and funny and cute all at the same time. Sophie is just really perfect for Draco. Everything she is just balances him out completely and I love it! I also love how you have the perfect mix of dialogue and description within your story. It’s wonderful and you do an excellent job telling this story. Draco is just so mean to Sophie at first, but I know he will open up to her soon and all of that will change!

I'm only reading Order of the Phoenix now, so I'm really confused about Mr.Weasley and things but this is a really great story, it's the first I've read on mibba and I think it is just wonderful. Hoping for an update soon! *fingers crossed* and ugh I just HAD to find this story when you left it off at THE BEST PART.

I hope everything goes well with ur move, anyhoo I'm sure Pansy feels like a complete and utter jackass for being a bitch to Sophie hmmm shut tht nasty ass attitude down, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I was seriously freaking out thinking you'd abandon this story, I'm happy you didn't ;) Hope everything goes fine with your move, good luck!
As for the story... aw poor Draco, that was very mean of Sophie. I understand she's not that well, but anyway... ouch! I'm dying to read about their Christmas Break!