What Lies Within - Comments

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love this story! can't wait to read more

Love it! Keep the updates coming.

Poor Sophie, I'm glad tht the trio understood about her sudden departure, Pansy like honestly shut up if u knew y Draco and Sophie was holding hands u would feel like a royal bitch, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

This story is great! I think you're doing a great job of mixing the fanfiction stuff with the novel stuff. I started reading a HP fanfic once where the author literally copied things straight from the books and just added in her character who would say stuff that Harry or Hermione or Ron said in the actual books. It killed me. And I also like how you didn't do the whole "I'm 17 and just found out I'm a witch" or "I'm being transferred to Hogwarts" jazz. So. Kudos! Haha I hope Draco's not getting too whipped! And I hope Sophie's relationship with Harry, Ron, and Hermione doesn't get too strained as she gets closer to Draco! Guess I'll just have to wait to see. :P Update soon!

Ah this is amazing<3

Aww I'm in love with this story <3
I don't even read that many HP fictions, maily because I love the books so much and sometimes people just destroy them but your story is awesome, I love the way you write and this sort of plot was exactly what I was looking for but never really found.
Sophie is lovely, I like that she comes from a pureblood family and her parents are Death Eaters but at the same time she manages to keep friends with Harry & Co. And I like that Draco even liking Sophie so much, is still being his badass self instead of a lovesick puppy so I hope he and Sophie get along in the end. And I wouldn't feel sorry for Harry if they'd end up ending their friendship, maybe because I'm a Slytherin at heart (mwahaha) so don't mind me
Anyway, good job, I really like where this story is going, so please update when you can, can't wait to read more!

awwww draco

Draco totally likes u Soph it's ridiculous, even Hermonie sees it and she more of a book worm than a gossip queen so u kno it's true, anyhoo love this chapter can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Love it Sophie u r starting to have a crush on Draco and don't even kno it yet can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I like this story already please continue writing I like Sophis she is soo badass, anyhoo can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

i'm excited to see where this goes :)

keep writing. this is gonna be a good story