A Lifeless Dream - Comments

I still feel that even though Brian tried to apologize and said he regrets everything negative, that he is still a butthole for saying it in the first place.

I'm angry against Alicia. I thought she'll go to Brian's home to apologize herself, but no. And now, I'm sure that something wrong happens with Lindsay. But it was a good chapter again =)

At least she's found a new place to live and a new job, but oh the irony the first band she has to shoot happens to be the guys. I think she's being a little bit too harsh on Brian though.

I have a weird feeling of Lindsay.
Not sure why.

I was dreading to read the chapter since you told me there was going to be lot of drama but it turned to be pretty 'smooth' I'm curious to see how things will evolve between Brian and Alicia. Can't wait to read the next chapter! Upload soon!! :)

Not sure if it's the effect of the amnesia but Alicia's like a little bipolar tornado

A very interesting chapter! I love it! I immediately said "OMG! What asshole she is!" But in the end she understand so it's cool lol ^^ Upload soon!!!!!

And it's cool for the M. Shadows one =) I can't wait to read it! ^^

@ Synystergateslover13
I will update the M. Shadows one propably next week and I have an idea for a Jimmy one but it might take a while ;) I'm glad to hear that I'm one of your favorites makes me proud of my work :D Thank you :)

Love this update<3. Can't wait to read the mshadows one would love to read a Jimmy one also:) keep them coming your one of my favorite authors

When I was in the middle of reading this I was thinking that she was overreacting. I mean they didn't lie to her. They just concealed a part from the truth which was for the best that time. In the end she realised it fortunately. It was good to see a bit of Zacky in here. He is taking a bigger role!! Apart from the fact I told you earlier...xD Anyway more drama please, haha!! Can't wait to read the next chapter! Upload soon!! ;)
Ps: New story yay!! But M.shadows? Come on! You know that I'm not reading M shadows fanfiction!(unless it's a love triangle with Brian or Jimmy and contains a lot of smut!! :P) I'm still waiting for a Jimmy one! <3

Oh okay! So I think you should do what you want, depending if you have more or less imagination. After maybe you had already writing your story or maybe you had any ideas for any chapters. Personnally, I like the two propositions. ^^ So for me it doesn't matter =).
(And don't be sorry, it's just that sometime I've got problem about the comprehension of certain sentences lol)

@ a-b 3
If I do make a sequel I would end this story on chapter 40 and then make a sequel if not this story will take about 60 chapter for me to finish it. The question was if I should end this on chapter 40 and then make a sequel of if I should end it on chapter 60 and not make a sequel! Sorry if I confused you :)

At first, for the chapter, I find it very interesting and I don't imagine this. You have a lot of imagination. ^^ I understand the Alicia's feelings, it shouldn't be obvious to wake up and don't remember what happens and why you are in the house of the person you never want to see again. I hope Brian will tell her the truth and she'll forgive him.

For the second, I don't really understand your question. Wholesale, or you want to write just one chapter reduce with all that compose the end of your story, or you want to write a sequel of 60 chapters ?

I love this!! Please update soon!! Alicia is starting to annoy me a bit but i guess you can't really expect her to be all happy when she just found out she was in an accident. I wonder what will happen when Brian tells her about the baby:O anyway... like i said please update soon!!!

I love the way you are going with this! I think you should just do it all in one so you don't have to mess with all the details that come with a sequel

She is soo stubborn!! I think i'm starting to hate her!! Hello! You are not the only person in the world! Others have feelings too! Oh and I forgot something. She remembered! I didn't expect that so early! And 60 chapters? We have a long way to go! I don't know if it's better to make a sequel or keep that way. As long as the story stays untouched any way you choose it's ok by me!

A very love chapter so cute =) I love it! But the headache is so strange, I hope it's not very bad but i'm sure there will be a huge drama again lol upload soon =D

I was going to say that was a really happy chapter, until it wasn't...! I really loved the beginning and the beach scene before the headache thing!(i want to go to the beach too! I mean look at the weather outside!) These headaches are really weird... and drama is coming yay!!(oh damn!!) Can't wait to read the next chapter!! Upload soon!! :)

Love the way this story is going. Just when you think everyone is going to get their happy ending bam more drama absolutely love this story can't wait for the next chapter:)

ove the way this story is going. Just when you think everyone is going to get their happy ending bam more drama absolutely love this story can't wait for the next chapter:)