A Lifeless Dream - Comments

Someone is jealous...! But what can you do? Jimmy rules haha!! Seriously I'm starting to think that this is a Jimmy story rather than Brian!!(Well, I wish!xD) Anyway, you should get rid of this David! He is starting to get to my nerves!! Overall great chapter!! Upload soon!!:)
Ps: Although I'm not watching Supernatural I found the scene with Dean completely hillarious!!:P

Oh I LOVE IT :3333 It's really suspensful and I really can't wait to see what will happen with that David-asshole :)

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Oh I LOVE IT :3333 It's really suspensful and I really can't wait to see what will happen with that David-asshole :)

UPDATEUPDATE :3 <3

Oh I LOVE IT :3333 It's really suspensful and I really can't wait to see what will happen with that David-asshole :)

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That was soooo good!! I'm glad Jimmy is by her side all the time! So does Brian but he needs to break up with Cynthia!!:P Can't wait to read the next chapter!! Upload soon!!!:)

Oh man, David is just a prick who can't handle rejection as has to go all macho. He really deserves to be castrated.

On a happier note, I'm glad that she's got it off her chest and told Jimmy. He and the other guys will protect her if the douche bag turns up

Aahhhgr. Does anyone have a canon for me??? A wanna blow a hole in Davids face that idiot. He's got a nerve to ring her ahh man. I know she's in good hands now. I really like that she got her friend back. Go Lulu!! Oh and keep writing please I love it

What the hell just happened? I hate David!! I hope he won't mess things up...something I doubt!! I love this chapter and also I love the scenes with Jimmy!!<3 Upload soon!!!:)

Oh... I love this. It was great. I really want to know what's gonna happen next. Great story.

Drama is coming..*dramatic music is playing*
Yes uhh.... Oh yeh finally a new chapter.
I think the friendship between jimmy and her will be really funny! Oh and Brian?! Don't make to many awkward moments or shit is about to go down I guess...
No seriously keep going I love your story

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Thanks for telling me! :)

Not to be pick or anything but I just noticed in chapter 2 that several times you wrote "staff" instead of "stuff". And although I've only read 2 chapters I have to say I am hooked and loving it so far. :)

Update soon!! :)

I've only read 4 chapters and I'm hooked already!! Damn I really like your story!!

I'm sensing some wicked chemistry between these two - Brian needs to dump the jealous as hell Cynthia though.

Ooh I can't wait for her to meet Jimmy :-)

I'm really liking this and yay Brian's made his appearance and seems a little smitten :-)

At last Synyster Gates made his appearance!! I bet something will happen between the two of them...! I love this chapter!! Can't wait for more!!:)

Thank you I really appreciate it!

Omg it's so intriguing and it's only the first chapter :) I'm looking forward to your next updates <3

Omg it's so intriguing and it's only the first chapter :) I'm looking forward to your next updates <3