January 13th, 2013 at 10:36am
Secret - Comments
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I totally think you should expand on this! Even if its just one more sexy update so they can really get down to the getting down. hahaNovember 7th, 2012 at 10:18pm
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Owwwww ;] that was insanely hot, I thought. I was laughing while reading the beginning though, Nola going through his things and destroying his Playboy x)October 13th, 2012 at 10:14am
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at first i thought Matt was going to walk in on them in the end haha but this was jesus, hot! it would make for a great story :)October 9th, 2012 at 04:32pm
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You should totally make this into a story!October 7th, 2012 at 12:00pm
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this would make a really good storyOctober 1st, 2012 at 12:15am
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loved this one shot and you should definitely make it a whole story! =)September 30th, 2012 at 11:18pm
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i love this you need to write more like make it a storySeptember 28th, 2012 at 07:10pm
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You should turn this into a story!i loved itSeptember 23rd, 2012 at 08:52pm
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That. Was. Hot. And i kinda like that they didnt have sex, it kept it interesting and teasing. I would love to see this as a story :)September 18th, 2012 at 11:32pm
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Well, if that doesn't put a little tingle in your pringle....hahaha
and if you want, I can make you a banner (:
you know since it'll be a storySeptember 18th, 2012 at 11:21pm -
Jesus! Yes! Please please do a story out of this. It would be so good! I just love all of your writing, it always flows so well and is hot as hell...whew, the thought of him *ahem* pleasuring himself above her killed me...for real, im now dead...lolSeptember 18th, 2012 at 07:31am
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I wish you would turn this into a story.. It'd be wonderful. I need more!!September 18th, 2012 at 02:12am
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Amazing! "even big rock stars need their Daddy," I laughed so hard! ^_^ This would be an amazing story and the way you explained the oral sex was quite brilliant. :) It's been a while since I've enjoyed reading someone else's work when it comes to that.September 18th, 2012 at 01:23am
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I liked this. You should defiantly turn this into a story!September 16th, 2012 at 12:34am
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I agree.l the. Plot was great.
Either a full story or a second shot >_<
There's something so...great about having a "secret" with syn when she's not supposed to. I mean Matt would be pissed to find one of his best friends is damn near about to deflower his innocent sister!!
Ma'am
I will sacrifice anything you want if you decided to make this a series or make another part to the one shot. Either that or I'll make you a sandwhich.
I see many possibilities!!!September 15th, 2012 at 10:49pm -
This would be amazing as a full story!September 15th, 2012 at 07:05pm
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good god yes, this was fucking amazingSeptember 15th, 2012 at 06:48pm
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woah yeap this was one awesome one-shot and i'd totally love to read it as a full story *fingers crossed that you make it into one*September 15th, 2012 at 09:45am
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i think would be an awesome story. i will subscribe hoping you turn it into a full story:) cause i loved it:)September 15th, 2012 at 09:28am
Are you still thinking about doing a story for this? I hope so...if not its cool...I mean, I'll just read your one shot over and over haha.