Secret - Comments

Possible boob job=$10,000.
Heavily padded push-up bra=$60.00
Drawing on the Playboy models with sharpie=Priceless.
Best thing ever!
Omg she's a giant pervert, I love it XD
This had the potential to go over the top but you kept it to the bare minimum and it really paid off. Having such a simple act between them was perfect, seriously. Penetration(finger doesn't count xD) would have taken it too far. This was sweet, in it's own way, and definitely hot. Seriously, yum.
Really well done hun!!
And as to the banner, I have no idea what you're talking about, it's awesome. And the 'dry spat' yah right. You're on fire girl. Keep it up!

love it! turn it into a story c:

Please turn this into a story. Please. I beg of you.

Amazing! I wish I could write more, but I am dead beat. Love this.... love you.

This was awesome! You should totally turn it into a story because I'd totally read it! I love your writing!! :D

You already know how I feel about this, but let me tell you again: I. LOVE. IT. I do. Brian's so devious and sneaky and for the love of God, every girl should have a Brian.

This was great! Way different from what I thought it was going to be which is good, because the way I assumed it would go is slightly overdone. XD I oddly love how Brian saw an opportunity to get some action and blackmailed her into doing it. Kind of wish there was another part just to see if and how Brian would keep getting in Nola's pants. Loved it! You never disappoint. :D

Amazing. I really liked the overall plot of the one-shot. I love your writing style and I love reading the unique plots that you come up with.