The Staff of Dreams - Comments

I like it!:) enjoyed the reading and impressed with the detailing plot and in the chapters. Keep it up hope you read one of mine and give me your advice and comment.

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Okay, I know I've only read the first chapter, but I LOVE this already! It's freaking amazing! I like that you have many of the old characters, but also have some of your own. Malicia is my favorite as of now!

I love this story! I thought the formatting was a little confusing at the beginning. It looked like maybe some of your coding didn’t work, so you might wanna fix that!
Other than that, the story is great! I love how you describe the world of Hogwarts. Ron and Hermione’s dialogue seems exactly like something that would really happen, and I love that! It seemed so true to the Hogwarts world that JK Rowling created and I absolutely love it! It was just so perfect. Hermione seems so smart in this story, too, which is amazing because you stayed true to her character and how she would actually believe. I thought some of your paragraphs seemed a little long, but other than that I loved this story!