A Different Light - Comments

Dear author, the comment swap thingy brought me here and I have to say I enjoyed reading this even though I didn't read the whole chapter because for some weird reason my mobile phone won't let the whole chapter load. I have subscribed though and I will read it till the end when I go home. :D I loved the summary but I didn't like the fact that the summary was used at the chapter too. You did a great job with the time lapse, it didn't feel like something was missing. Your descriptions were simply amazing as well as the dialogues. There were no grammar/spelling errors that caught my eye and I liked the flow. All in all, well done. I believe this deserves ten out of ten pens. ~Marian.

Dear author, the comment swap thingy brought me here and I have to say I enjoyed reading this even though I didn't read the whole chapter because for some weird reason my mobile phone won't let the whole chapter load. I have subscribed though and I will read it till the end when I go home. :D I loved the summary but I didn't like the fact that the summary was used at the chapter too. You did a great job with the time lapse, it didn't feel like something was missing. Your descriptions were simply amazing as well as the dialogues. There were no grammar/spelling errors that caught my eye and I liked the flow. All in all, well done. I believe this deserves ten out of ten pens. ~Marian.

First of all there was Baekyeol which made me the happiest girl in the world. Secondly, this was wonderfully written (like all of your other pieces) which also made me happy.

I really love how Kai and Yoona's relationship evolved from the beginning to the end. I especially like that it started with dance, as in her seeing him dancing at night. When she said she cries herself to sleep I wanted to hug her omg. I love Yoona. She's my favorite after Sunny in SNSD.

ANYWAY, back to the story. Like I said, watching them go from awkward friends to a couple was quite enjoyable. I loved that there was also a good amount of humor in this. Although, I'd be lying if I said one of my favorite parts wasn't having Chanyeol lose and getting to imagine him in a french maid costume lol.

I must admit, I know very little (if anything) about Exo, but this was brilliantly written. You are very witty and clever.

"What I said." - That part was so sweet! I loved it!

Nice layout as well. Very clean and simple. Easy to read.

v. I forgot to mention but I think it's somewhat short. I would've loved it, if it had more chapters.

OH MY GOD. KAIIIIII. Oh my god.

I am flabbergasted as hell now. Who would've thought I would see an EXO-K fanfic here in Mibba? Let alone, a Kai fanfic?

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You don't know how happy I am to see this fanfic