Diary of a Pessimist - Comments

I think this is a really interesting story, and it has tons of potential, but the capitalization throws me off. I get that with the plot of the story and the narrator, it makes sense for it to be laid back and not capitalized, but it really turned me off from the story.

I do love the plot though, the summary was really interesting and I really like the idea for the story. The narrator is my kind of person, incredibly pessimistic and cynical, aha. I love it.

After you fix the capitalization, I think this would be a super awesome story. Good luck with it!

I found this on comment swap and I must say it's really good. I'm guessing you fixed the capitalization? The plot is unique from what I have read and you really grabbed my interest with your wording and the way you started the story, even with the capitalization in the summary. The characters are interesting and their personalities are easy to relate to. I can't wait for an update :)

Okay, okay. It stops hurting. Subscribing.

Wow! I was just going to say the same thing. I want to read on, truly I do, because even the summary had me hooked but when I saw the second and third sentences didn't begin with a capital letter, I just couldn't...

It looked really interesting, but for the love of God, capitalize your letters!