Things Aren't Always What They Seem - Comments

I started this last night after the game. I was up until 3 am reading this. I could not stop even for sleep. I even cried a few times. I did not want this story to end. You have so much talent. You told this story beautifully. I can't wait to start reading your other stories.

I FORGOT THAT YOU WROTE THIS MASTERPIECE AS WELL OMG
someone needs to get you a contract Jesus

I am up wayyyyyy too late reading this story considering I have an exam tomorrow, but it's so drama-filled that I'm addicted!! I LOVE IT

I just spent every spare moment of the last couple days reading this story!!!! AMAZING!!!! Seriously wonderful!!

I'm sad it's over too, but it was amazing. You had me on my toes the whole time. Great job! I'm definitely going to heck out your James Neal story because I love him too!

Awesome ending to a great story! Thanks for all of the effort you put into this. I'm sad to see it end, but I have to say you ended it perfectly! Cant wait to read your James Neal story! :)

*begins slow clap* wow. Just wow. This story was truly amazing and I thank you 100 times over for writing it.

I'm so sad to see this end =( but it really was a perfect ending and this whole story was just so good. You are a very talented writer! I can't wait for your next one to get started

Really loved your story - and like most of the other posters, I am sorry that it had to end.

But you gave us readers the perfect send-off - a glimpse into a future where things are as they should be....Jon and Charlotte are happy and healthy raising a bunch of little Toews - the rough waters with Kaner have been calmed, and he has grown up and taken adult responsibilities for his daughter - and finally, things did not end all "Rosey" for Rose. I like to think that Karma bit her in the butt for what she did - because I really like to believe that eventually we all reap what we sow.

I look forward to your next venture. I am sure it will be creative and well thought out as well!

Ahh it's over :( But I loved the way it ended! Glad that Pat finally moved on from Charlotte. Hope that they raise lovely little Tazer children :)

This story had so much time and effort out into it and it showed, it was a fanfic but it wasn't typical or cookie cutter but any means. I can't wait to see what you have in store for the next one, in heading over there right now!
Thank you for giving me something I actually looked forward to reading.

I can't believe this story is over! You did such an amazing job with it and I loved every chapter!
Anyway, I'm glad Patrick ended up happy. He deserves it, to be quite honest. I'm probably the minority here, but he went through a lot of shit too, and I'm glad he ended up okay:)

I can't believe this story is over :( You did a fantastic job and I enjoyed every chapter. This is definitely one of my more favourite Toews stories. Thanks for writing such an awesome story! :)

I can't wait to read your James Neal story! From the description it sounds really interesting.

I think James Neal or Patrick Sharp would be a perfect fit for your new story. Just a suggestion, 'cause Sharpie's married and all. Unless you're not planning to use Abby as the other half of the married couple.

Please update before I expload!!

It's sad to see this story ending! But I really loved it & I cannot wait to read your future stories. This is without a doubt one of my fav stories. I'd really love to see what happens with Patrick and Rose. I think James Neal would be interesting for your next story (;

It's hard to believe this story is coming to an end. I've enjoyed reading it so much and you've done a great job with it. Definitely one of my favourite Toews stories I've read on here.

The idea for your next story sounds interesting. Maybe you could choose Patrick Sharp for it.

Thank you so much for writing this story. It has truly been beautiful and hands down the best story I have ever read on here. You are really talented.

awe they were so sweet. I loved that they couldn't stand to spend one more night apart. I'm so sad to see this end. I loved it!!!! PMS

I can't believe this is almost over! They are SO perfect together! I can't wait for the final chapter because I know it'll be amazing! And your idea for the next story sounds great! I would love nearly and player, maybe a Red Wing in particular :)