Things Aren't Always What They Seem - Comments

First off I was so eager to read that I didn't realize that it said 21 at the beginning of the chapter so I was SO confused. Next OMG that proposal I did think it'd be this chapter so I was surprised, but a part of me though it was coming , and coming soon. I just wanna see this mystical ring lol
They've literally been in love forever, they are soul mates. Kaner's not going to be happy about this too bad, everyone else is! Can't wait for more

awww Jonathan was amazing. That was so sweet and perfect. I love this!!! PMS

I love it!!

I loved this, so romantic! I love that he bought the ring so long ago, it showed her that he is her one true love! I just love them, I don't want this story to end! :)

Oh my God, the beginning was so cute, I figured he was going to propose (the right way) again, but it even took my by surprise the way he did it! I'm not gonna lie, when Char called Jon to see why he was late I was thinking she was acting like a total bitch, but I don't even care because THEY'RE GETTING MAAARRIIEEEEDDDD!!!!!!

That has got to be the most romantic proposal I have read/seen anywhere. I love this chapter so much! I wasn't expecting the proposal at all. Great job!

I loved this chapter - although I must confess, I thought Charlotte was going to pull a "switcheroo" on Jon and propose to HIM on the rooftop!

But the whole scenario, coupled with the fact he had bought the ring months ago, was a romantic masterpiece.

I did find it funny, however, that Jon conned Kaner into buying Charlotte a different ring.

I loved it!!!!!!!!! That was so romantic! If you hadn't put the flashback at the beginning I never would have expected the proposal. And I agree with Charlotte about Chicago at night. I just got back from Chicago, and the skyline is so beautiful at night. Great chapter. I'm really looking forward to more. :)

I love them. I love them. I love them. I think I died and went to Charlotte and Jonathan heaven.

You are right. I didn't like this chapter ....... I LOVED it. I love seeing them working towards their happily ever after. Often there is so much sadness as evidenced in the Boston bombing. We all need some happy:)

I love when they're happy, too. :) It even almost makes me forget that Toews scored the tying goal tonight against the Red Wings. Almost. xP Can't wait for more!

Fluff is needed in a story, I liked it in this chapter. I'm happy Charlotte talked Jon out of going to see Pat. Loved the chapter :)

So cute. I'm glad that both of them see that Patrick is suffering for everything has done and doesn't need anything more. Great update!

I don't mind the fluff at all. They've been through so much and it's obviously still honeymoon phase for them. It's actually really cute.

I'm glad he didn't beat Pat up. As much as I hate him, he's got a lot going on right now. I still hope he dumps Rose on her ass but loves his kid. I hate her. Pat really needs to pull his head out of his ass and make it up to Charlotte. He's been terrible to her yet says he loves her. B.S.

I think that fluff is intrinsic in good stories but I hate stories that are all like that and my dear yours is nt. you know the way to put in Reiss and turns and it's still interesting pretty realistic and addictive, an amazing and potent combination. Can't wait for the next update: again, these two do deserve some happiness everything they've done would have been in vain otherwise. Charlotte is so right and being so mature about the Pat thing. He's miserable in his life and it's his own fault. Seriously love this so much gah!!!

I love the fluff!!! Happy stories are my favorite!!

See Char is smart and she does think. And it was very nice and mature of her to tell Pat the deal. Rose has a right to be angry by its not like she doesn't have something to offer she needs to put herself first and she shouldn't want to hate someone because they dorm love her, I'm glad she realized that. She's still a bitch though! That is so sweet that she set that up for him these two need these downs to have the great ups ;)
Can't wait for the next update and obviously you're as hooked as we are since you're updating so quickly!! Keep it up (if you can).

Wow....three updates in a row! :) I'm glad that she went back to Jon's to apologize. I know she's been worked over by Pat, but she knows that Jon is NOT Pat! I knew there would be drama, but as long as we get a "happily ever after" in the end for Charlotte and Jon I will be good! They deserve it after all they have been through. Please continue the quick updates....they are awesome! :)

Well thank GOD it's Pat's baby! Of course because that means it's not Jon's, and because I bet it will help Patrick grow up. And it's really good that Charlotte is opening up to Jon. They seem to know everything about each other because they've been best friends so long, but I'm sure there is a lot about Char that is a bit of a secret because it was during her relationship with Patrick.