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  • teenagedream91

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    @ BlueDreams
    Deep down, way deep down Dasha does not like Tony. She doesn't like the attention; this woman truly does like not the attention he recieves from her, this story isn't a typical story of 'Oh I hate him, but the attention and things he does for me...I freaking love it' It's not like that at all. Will she soften up? Obviously over time, but I am not going to make it that easy. Worrying for Tony, she honestly did forget with how busy she is haha I can tell you that.
    Yeah I thought it would be a great add in and that whole chapter was with someone helping me along the way which I am grateful for and made it longer than I anticipated.
    I'm glad that you love their interaction and that's what Tony loves to do throw her off even if he was beng bluntly honest like that. I know he does that from time to time like when Pepper was replacing his old reactor with a new one he went soft for a moment that was what I was going for.
    It would be funny if she was, oh the thing he would make her do XD
    October 27th, 2012 at 08:22pm
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    @ JustThinking
    Well this isn't your typical I love you story and caving in after a few chapters. I always found that so boring and never really had a story that actually let it resonated with one or both people and then gradually go from there. Glad you like it
    October 27th, 2012 at 08:17pm
  • BlueDreams

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    I bet that Dasha, deep down, loves the attention Tony gives her. No matter how he does it and even though she doesn't show it, I bet she's worried about Tony.
    Ah, I love the fact that Dasha 'pumped' Tony up. It's just curious to see that of all people, she's the person he remembered and who motivated him in a moment of crisis.
    Obadiah is lying obviously. He's a bloody bastard and that's pretty much my opinion of him.
    Tony's back! And he was so bluntly honest that Dasha was even a bit off, ohhh I like that. I love their interaction more and more, honestly.
    Well, I have to say that it would be interesting if Dasha was Tony's personal doctor but he'll need a really, really good argument ahah
    October 27th, 2012 at 01:58pm
  • JustThinking

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    I like how realistic this whole hatred thing still is.. Honestly I'm loving it. [cue McD theme song] like earlier said, the whole not suddenly stopping the hate for someone during the first chapters thing is as good as ever. Hmmm... Can't wait for more. Smile good chapter.
    October 27th, 2012 at 12:10pm
  • teenagedream91

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    @ BlueDreams
    Nope he will definitely get scratched.
    No that wouldn't be a good idea, but she will still have her temper going when around him.
    Yep :D
    October 24th, 2012 at 01:18am
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    @ teenagedream91
    Exactly ahah
    I could figure that out because Dasha has her claws out and isn't it easy for him.
    Haha he's her boss so kick his balls is not a good idea xD.
    Oh really? Nice :D
    October 24th, 2012 at 12:25am
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    @ BlueDreams
    Pepper really is and she has her flaws, but they aren't emphasized like Tony's haha
    He has been adding things here and there, but Dasha is really stubborn and things are going to start off pretty slowly with these two on the whole getting along and actually developing feelings of that sort. Things will be pretty crazy in further chapters, but that Stark humor will get Dasha stuck, not knowing if she should embrace it or kick his balls.
    Tony did do it at the goodness of his heart and it was really great to see.
    No she can't get rid of him and Tony will be in the next chapter, it's pretty long in my standards, but it's really good and one of the best chapters I think I have written since I plotted the next one with a friend a year ago to make it more Tony like with his return home :)
    October 23rd, 2012 at 10:31pm
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    JARVIS! Hahaha And Pepper always being so sweet. I seriously love the character, she IS a saint!
    Ahh some good old Stark humor. I love the man and I really hope that Dasha gets to see who he really is soon, after all he's been insisting quite a lot.
    Tony gave the presents! Oh I'm so happy about that. Tony winning hearts slowly and oh God, he's actually such a good man and I hope that this is the moment in which Dasha will actually give him a chance.
    WHAT? MAJOR TWIST! She isn't getting rid of him ahah
    October 23rd, 2012 at 09:50pm
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    @ JustThinking
    I love your words :) yes he is throwing gasoline on burning fire of hate. There is a fine line between hate and love, sure there is. Hate sex? There is a possibility, but anytime soon? I can say no not anytime soon.
    October 23rd, 2012 at 06:46pm
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    Haha! Tony is throwing gasoline on an already burning fire of hate.. But then again there isn't a long way between hate and love... Or maybe they'll just have hate sex at some point? Idk, just a sudden thought. Hmmm... Good chapter. Smile
    October 23rd, 2012 at 05:29pm
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    @ punkrockerballerina
    He did and fyi I wrote this like a year ago so I didn't really think about it since I wrote the New Years chapter for New Years and then my previous readers wanted a Christmas one so that's why. I am aware of it. In all honesty, Dasha is happy that he is gone. She can care less if he is gone and isn't there for a period of time.
    October 23rd, 2012 at 06:37am
  • Blessedelua

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    awwwww Tony did a good thing!!!!! *just fyi you had new years before christmas...* And I seriously want her to beat him when he gets back, although I wonder where he is going for a month.
    October 23rd, 2012 at 06:25am
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    @ JustThinking
    Oh well he's one of those people with money at the event just like Tony and he showed interest in dasha since she looked different. It is overused and I try to stay away from it as much as possible depending on the story.
    October 19th, 2012 at 01:30am
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    @ teenagedream91
    I know, I know xD
    Uhhh, I can't wait then :)
    October 19th, 2012 at 01:18am
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    @ BlueDreams
    He should know he's a man himself lol
    There will be some type of rivalry it can be a person or something else. I can't tell you. Well it will be a number of things actually. No Devon never had a chance and she was going to turn him down if Tony didn't interrupt. You shall see :)
    October 19th, 2012 at 12:55am
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    @ teenagedream91
    Fair enough, think it's more about the mysterious Devon than a want for a triangle drama really.. Those are kind of overused lately.. At least in those stories I've read. So I'm actually kind of glad now that I've realised what Devon staying would have meant that he won't turn up again.
    October 19th, 2012 at 12:55am
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    @ JustThinking
    You're not the only one. Here's the thing I already typed up a lot of chapters for this story so I can say that Devon won't be in the story anymore. The first movie isn't really a big transition in dasha life here will be scenes here and there. I already planned something big that will put a strain on them both and I feel like I use the whole triangle thing too much. Such an easy route to take and I want to do something different.
    October 19th, 2012 at 12:49am
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    Not going to lie, I'm hoping for a Devon invasion in the near future xD that could be some healthy competition for Tony.. Unless she actually gave Devon a shot.. Then Tony is just a little bit screwed.. Hehe.. Good chapter. Smile
    October 18th, 2012 at 09:10pm
  • BlueDreams

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    @ teenagedream91
    Hahah Jak knows the male mind.
    Uhhh at least there's a rival, Tony needs one. Oh alright so Devon didn't really have a chance.
    It depends on where she wakes up, I suppose eheh
    October 18th, 2012 at 07:45pm
  • teenagedream91

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    Forgot to mention in my earlier one that Dasha is no way ready for a relationship so she just saw Devon as a friend for the night. Nothing would have come of it even if Devon pursued her.
    October 18th, 2012 at 05:11pm