Close Your Eyes - Comments

@ BlueDreams
Thankfully he has great taste and is a great nurse and friend haha he knows how to lure in Tony with the dresses and make them a little bit tasteful for dasha.
No someone else is his rival in future chapters. That's all I'm giving away whether it's really competition I can say a little bit.
Dasha isn't the one that panics in situations if she wakes up after a drunken night. She's rather composed woman so she will have confusion and get angry but not panicky in any way

@ teenagedream91
He actually has a great taste eheh
Oh okay, I thought he might be a 'rival' for Tony.
It was funny, she's going to 'kill' yourself when she waked up ahah

@ BlueDreams
Of course! Jak is always have something for dasha.
Haha probably since he has such great taste in music. Don't listen to the bands he listens to but I heard a couple of times. She'll get to know him no worries there.
Devon just made a cameo nothing special. He's not coming back into the story. She did faint because of how highly intoxicated she was and she was just overwhelmed. It was a funny scene.

Of course that Jak was going to give her a sexy dress ahah it's New Year's with Stark after all xD
I bet he was humming ACDC, he's pretty badass in his music taste.
Quite honestly, I think that when Dasha meets the 'real' Tony, she'll be impressed. He's so much more than just a playboy, but he's a playboy still ahah Stark is a contradiction.
Oh new character!
Noooo, poor Dasha! I'm laughing so hard ahah Of course Tony would kiss her for New Year's but ahh she actually fainted... poor woman.

@ punkrockerballerina
She won't be out of character that's for sure and even if or when they get together she won't really lose her temper. Dasha will still have her same fiery attitude

@ teenagedream91
Haha good, got to keep your strong girl strong!

@ punkrockerballerina
I already have things planned further down the line, adding Devon into the picture was never my intention. I want Tony and Dasha to build up something before IM starts even if it is minor improvement and don't worry it won't be all mushy or Dasha will fall in love in a matter of chapters, it will take her a long time to even have feelings or even accept them.

@ teenagedream91
awwwww damn I thought it might be nice for Tony to have some healthy competition.

@ punkrockerballerina
She might do damage with how much of a hangover she has and as for Devon, he's not important. Just some man that was there.

Oh there is gonna be so much hell to pay tomorrow. Not only from her hangover, but also Tony might be missing some parts by the time she's done with him. And who is this new bloke? I'm interested in him.

@ JustThinking
Haha thanks :)

@ teenagedream91
your welcome, and I might remember later on... so if a random compliment shows up you know why xD

@ JustThinking
You said it properly :) I try to make her as irresponsible as possible since I never written on before and she does have her moments for taking care of willow but she rather go out and party. Haha it's okay if you can't remember I'm just flattered that ou said that

@ teenagedream91
Then you have succeeded indeed... Feel like smacking her.. xD you're really good at making characters come alive.. Don't know if I have said that properly.. So yeah.. But so far that is a general thing I've noticed about your writing.. Good writing style and good "alive" characters.. Can't remember if there was anything else xD

@ JustThinking
I think it's pretty good and her hatred goes more than five chapters like a lot of people write it off as. Their childish behavior cracks me up since dasha sees herself as a mature adult and she acts like this when she is around Tony. Cracks me up everytime. Ivy pisses everyone off and that's what I want

Well this is pretty good, I like the whole hate his guts thing and the whole childish behaviour thing from them both... Hmm.. I think it's pretty well written and I like how the characters are coming to live on the page.. Ivy is pissing me off.. Such a.. Anyways, I'm subscribing and looking forward to more.

@ teenagedream91
I can see that and it's a trait I like about her :)
That's so true ahah
Oh thank Goodness. I instantly assumed it but nevertheless I decided to ask. That's true and using Pepper on the triangle would be repetitive and diminishing for the character.

@ BlueDreams
Amen to that. Dasha would be a great mother, she already is one. More of a mother than an aunt. She's great with kids regardless.
It is irony, everyone has that one person they can't help but be the opposite of how they are to.
Oh I didn't mention that huh? I have read so many stories where they are love triangles with Pep included. Mine isn't one of those. So no, Pepper and Tony do not have romantic feelings for one another. It's overused and I find it annoying since Pepper does go back and forth between Tony and Happy in the comic books and then goes to Tony. I rather not deal with that and just focus on my main character with Tony

@ teenagedream91
That Dasha is more of a mother than Ivy ahah
Ohhh the irony eheh love it!
Well in this story Pep doesn't have feelings for Tony right?

@ BlueDreams
Totally forgot what Jak said but yes he is right haha
Dasha can be polite when needed be, but when it comes to Tony all her politeness goes out the window. She can't stand him lol
Pep is one of the most patient women on the planet and I give her credit for dealing with Tony and now she feels bad for Dasha to have Tony stuck on her like glue.
Like I said, Tony has his ways of getting what he wants. There are more ways coming soon.