Close Your Eyes - Comments

I'm with Jak about Willow, he's totally right.
Oh that's awkward.... Dr. Cooper asking Dasha about Tony almost like "I don't want your affair here" xD but Dasha turned around nicely, that was a good way to go! Ahah but now face the consequences deary ;)
Pepper! One of the most patient women on Earth ahah
Oh Tony you sassy man ahah They 'kissed' and gosh I can't stop laughing! Tony is priceless.

@ punkrockerballerina
haha he is a sneaky bastard and I found it hilarious what he did too. We all know Tony is going to survive her attacks, but let's see what happens

@ megurine luka
Thanks for the heads up. I'll read it when I have time

Your story would be better if you put periods or commas on the dialogs. Actually, it's better if you follow the right way to write dialogs. The Knowledge Base has an article about dialogs so it would be best if you took some time to read it in order to make your story better.

XD that sneaky little bastard, he's adorable!!!!!! haha I enjoyed his chaste peck and then her delayed reaction, honestly I have a feeling they won't make it through the night at the charity event without her beating him upside the head with random objects.

@ BlueDreams
He's not ashamed and being truthful draws them in too. His blunt nature has a certain charm to it. You can dream until it is revealed :)

@ teenagedream91
Hahaha I can't stop laughing!
I know, I was being dramatic. Every woman who falls into Tony's grace, knows what she's up against. He's blunt about it.
I know, I know but a girl can dream about something awesome eheh

@ BlueDreams
He's always asking for a slap. As long as it's kinky haha
Amy is not really a victim she knows what she is dealing with.
I can't say much about Scott. Everything will be revealed in time

Hahahaha I love Tony, he's so funny but also asking for slap I think.
Poor Amy, another Stark victim.
Dear Lord, what's wrong with Scott? Does he have superpowers? Oww that'd be awesome *.*

@ punkrockerballerina
haha I love Jak too he's just so sneaky with Dasha when he wants to be.

ay!!!! I can't wait to hear their conversation, and Jak is such a sneak, no wonder I adore his fiiiine gay ass.

@ BlueDreams
No you didn't get it wrong, just a different field. She does surgery while a pediatrician just really does smaller things than surgery. Dasha was trained to be a surgeon and still going through it. It's a long road, with medical school, internship and then residency before being a certified surgeon.
Jak and Dasha are really great together :)
He probably would, but he knows his boundaries and sees that Tony has an eye out for Dasha.

@ teenagedream91
Okay, then I didn't get it too wrong eheh
It's great to have Jak around, Dasha and him seem to form a good team :D
I know he will ahah I've noticed, I bet Jak would take Tony for himself if he had the change *wink wink*

@ BlueDreams
Close, she's a pediatric surgeon. Scott is like around eleven years old so yeah anyone under 18 is considered a child.
Jak does work with Dasha haha nice to see that you noticed. He is one of the main nurses she wants to check on her patients and all since he's really on top of things and is willing to listen to her and not crack under her strict instructions.
Tony will have more genius plans like this. Just wait and see. Jak is really sympathetic and a sucker for good looking men since he is rooting for the other team.

Losing patients must be awful and for what I see, Dasha might be a pediatrician? Sasha was a child and Scott seems to also be really young.
Oh Jak works with Dasha! I hadn't realized that before.
I knew Tony would do something like that ahah Genius! Oww poor Jak! We all love you darling, you're just trying to be a good friend :3

Love you darling! <3

@ teenagedream91
Hahaha That's so true!

@ BlueDreams
No, Tony Stark admitting he's a softie, the world would freeze over before that happens

@ teenagedream91
It's Tony Stark after all, he can't reveal that he's a softie in anything, even though, he is.

@ BlueDreams
No he's not ashamed of most things people are. He just says what is on his mind, but there are a few soft spots he won't reveal.

@ teenagedream91
I know he won't. That's part of why I love him. He's very honest to himself and well he doesn't hide anything. What you see is what you get.
Two stubborn cookies eheh