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    @ teenagedream91
    Well it came out amazing! As usual!! I loved it, i didn't mind the skip you made it pretty clear what happened in between lol.
    April 19th, 2014 at 05:10am
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    @ popcandy07
    Thank you XD I was so nervous for this chapter since it made that turn. I wanted it to be a surprise because of their relationship and the huge time skip that I have done.
    April 18th, 2014 at 06:04am
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    This was well worth the wait!! gahh!! I love love loved it! I was totally not expecting that to happen. Ohhh now I really can't wait for an update idk what to expect next!!! Greatttttttt jobbbbbbbbbbbbb!
    April 18th, 2014 at 05:36am
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    @ bxgurl95
    thanks haha it was unexpected considering the time skip and now they are all over each other. That is going to be their biggest issue, communication. Dasha and Tony are so used to being by themselves and only taking care of themselves it's going to take some time for them to actually improve on stuff like that.
    April 17th, 2014 at 06:43pm
  • bxgurl95

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    Yea lol really didn't expect that, it was hot!!
    Even though they aren't a conventional couple, she needs to be clear about what she expects out if Tony. Therefore they should do coupley things and he should remember things about her.
    Good update
    April 17th, 2014 at 01:09pm
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    Looking forward to the next chapter!
    March 31st, 2014 at 08:02am
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    I cannot wait!!!!!
    March 30th, 2014 at 02:50pm
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    @ popcandy07
    It's not going to be good lol pretty traumatic and sad actually
    March 29th, 2014 at 09:21am
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    @ teenagedream91
    Ahh ok. Well I loved this update. I can't wait to see what she went through when she was younger!
    March 28th, 2014 at 03:39pm
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    @ popcandy07
    She has craziness in her head but she thought for herself this time. Her she went through something traumatic in therapy when she was younger(I will elaborate in the future) she went through it alone and it was horrible. So she is highly depending on tony to be there. All her concerns were thrown out the window for him saying screw it and sticking to what she feels best. People always dictated how she felt and she followed them. This time she doesn't.
    March 28th, 2014 at 04:47am
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    @ teenagedream91
    Yes I thought she was going to give him up. All that runs through her head is a bunch of crazy stuff lol. I liked it you did awesome!!!! :) Thanks for updating.
    March 28th, 2014 at 03:25am
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    @ BlueDreams
    It does and I do have to say I didn't want her transition to be easy. It's a hard life to live and the training is brutal no matter what you have been through. It already changed her but learning to cope and having Jak there might help in the long run. I had to squeeze a bit of humor haha tony can't be serious 100% of the time
    March 25th, 2014 at 08:27pm
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    @ bxgurl95
    Needs for her to get rattled in order for her to be openly affectionate. Tony beat her to it, slowly though lol. He will interfere with her work if she is to live the life of an agent then she can't be attached to anything and having her being displayed everywhere won't help her cause in their defense.
    March 25th, 2014 at 08:24pm
  • BlueDreams

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    Well, if there were still any doubts, Dasha's reluctance in ending it all just proves that Tony had grown on her. Whether or not she likes to end things, it's clear that he's 'something' she doesn't want to end, at least not for SHIELD.
    I had a feeling that it wouldn't be easy to fit into SHIELD but I hope that Dasha doesn't lose herself in the process.
    Though, Tony is surprising as always haha I'm glad to see them together, I have to say.
    March 25th, 2014 at 07:44pm
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    Well they're getting somewhere and they definitely seem way more connected. Dasha seems confused though, and I really want to know why they don't want her to be with Tony.
    March 25th, 2014 at 05:57pm
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    @ popcandy07
    Thank you. I was so skeptical about this one. To me it's crappy, but the best I could do. Yes she stayed with him, doubted she was going to stay with him? Hmmm?
    March 25th, 2014 at 06:32am
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    Oh M gee! Another great one! I loved how she decided to stay with him and not break it off shaa she likes him!
    March 25th, 2014 at 05:34am
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    @ BlueDreams
    I know lol it's a brain splitter. I'm just weighing it out
    January 1st, 2014 at 02:05am
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    @ teenagedream91
    I know, I don't know what I'd do in your place xD
    December 31st, 2013 at 04:29pm
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    @ greyeyes-darkskies
    Aww a squeal is good. I give a good squeal too when I update haha since this story isn't as updated as much as my other ones.
    December 31st, 2013 at 04:09am