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  • Emmy2550

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    I seriously love this so much! Its hilarious but serious and just a really nice story!
    October 8th, 2013 at 12:27am
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    @ popcandy07
    Thank you haha it was very sudden and I was going to keep this pg-13 but my mind got the best of me and I'm more confident in my smut writing technique than I was when I first started this. Hopefully I can do it justice when the time comes to do the dirty lol
    October 3rd, 2013 at 03:06am
  • popcandy07

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    Ohh my I just got to read!! I'm loving the chemistry between the two!! So awesome! You did an amazing job on this one I'm loving the naughty ... lol
    October 3rd, 2013 at 02:33am
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    @ greyeyes-darkskies
    Thank you so much for the comment :)
    October 2nd, 2013 at 03:36am
  • greyeyes-darkskies

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    I love this story so so so so much.
    October 2nd, 2013 at 01:31am
  • BlueDreams

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    @ teenagedream91
    I didn't forget! I just thought he'd have a bigger role in the plot.
    October 2nd, 2013 at 12:15am
  • teenagedream91

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    @ BlueDreams
    Did you forget? Haha he was sent to Xavier's school of the gifted. Ororo Munroe aka Storm took him to the school. It wasn't specified what he did but I can tell you he had the power of controlling living cells so when he wanted someone to die of a stroke or something he can control that and have the die. His powers were activated with anger but wit proper training he can use it for good.
    September 30th, 2013 at 06:32pm
  • BlueDreams

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    @ teenagedream91
    Oh so he does have powers!
    September 30th, 2013 at 03:56pm
  • teenagedream91

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    @ BlueDreams
    No haha he isn't going to be linked into the story. Yes he has powers but no one really knows what he is capable of except for storm and possibly his classmates.
    September 30th, 2013 at 02:08pm
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    @ teenagedream91
    There isn't? I could he had powers too xD
    September 30th, 2013 at 08:48am
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    @ BlueDreams
    With Scott? There's nothing fishy with Scott haha
    September 30th, 2013 at 06:34am
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    @ teenagedream91
    I wonder what is up with him. I feel like there's something 'fishy' there.
    September 30th, 2013 at 01:28am
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    @ BlueDreams
    It is a lot of power and that's why she is essential for the team and why she is looked after. Her file deemed her dangerous when tony was looking at it and it's important to remember that. Why are you thinking about Scott?
    September 30th, 2013 at 12:01am
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    @ teenagedream91
    That's a lot of power, really, and I can't stop thinking about Scott.
    September 29th, 2013 at 01:22pm
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    @ BlueDreams
    She can't physically control them like move them around, but she can knock them unconscious, make them in a vegetative state or kill them. Who knows if she will link with Tony...
    Yeah, can't change your family though. You are stuck with what you got lol
    September 29th, 2013 at 03:59am
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    @ teenagedream91
    I mean, does she control who she links with? I wonder if she'll link with Tony...
    Of course she does. Ivy is family for the better or the worse, I just wish she had a different attitude sometimes.
    September 29th, 2013 at 03:14am
  • teenagedream91

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    @ BlueDreams
    Tony is still winning. Emma tried to help but it was a major fail. I thought that scene was hilarious XD
    What do you mean natural or whoever she's linked to? She links to special people in her life like her mother and then it linked to her younger sister, only one person and then she can break into anyone conscious if Dasha is strong enough to do so to do whatever she wants with it. If that makes sense so she can't have that special link with tony, willow, her father or her friends. She's not that advanced.
    Of course, people think Dasha doesn't but she does have a soft spot for Ivy. Ivy is her little sister and she will always look out for her and they do have big fights like any other sister would. I get all this hate for Ivy to have something bad happen to her XD lol most people don't get what they deserve and Ivy will need to grow up on her own if ever. It's her choice to do so nothing can change that except for her
    September 28th, 2013 at 04:55pm
  • BlueDreams

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    WOW. Tony got so dirty right at the beginning hahaha but he did do what he wanted and I think that both him and Dasha know how sexually 'frustrated' she is.
    I have to say though that her 'Emma vendetta plan' was a bit of a fluke. Tony is still winning haha
    About Dasha's powers, does she control who she makes connections with? Or is it natural?
    Oh my.. the never ending sexual teasing haha
    And well.. Dasha just.. I understand her soft spot for Ivy but I mean, she needs to be a better mom.
    September 28th, 2013 at 02:30pm
  • teenagedream91

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    @ BlueDreams
    Yeah sometimes it just doesn't.
    July 24th, 2013 at 04:35am
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    @ teenagedream91
    I know! It's terrifying.
    It is something but sometimes relationships don't work and that's life.
    July 23rd, 2013 at 11:49pm