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  • teenagedream91

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    Oh yeah it is crazy when it happens. I know I would be scared shitless. I am thinking I had a baby on the way and didnt know it? You don't take care of yourself as much as you think you should if you knew and all.
    It would be since the divorce rate here is really high and something like this s what it happens. I mean by the end the two are rebuilding their relationship again to see if it will work after a break from one another. Yet she was disappointed. I don't get it. I mean they are trying again isn't that something?
    July 23rd, 2013 at 08:07pm
  • BlueDreams

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    @ teenagedream91
    I mean, I didn't know until I watched the show and even still I find it so crazy when it happens.
    I mean divorcing would probably be more real given our present time.
    July 23rd, 2013 at 12:41am
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    @ BlueDreams
    It's crazy when I watch those. I'm just in awe like how can you not know but it happens. I wanted to show that it was possible and I thought a lot of people knew about this. Apparently not because I got some bad backlash with that lol I had to clear it up that it was indeed possible.
    It is possible and I was honestly tired of having my characters work out their problems and not divorce. So I had mine divorce and all that jazz
    July 22nd, 2013 at 03:07pm
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    @ teenagedream91
    It's odd but it's possible yes. I watched those too and it's just crazy! For me, it is but well it happens I guess.
    July 22nd, 2013 at 12:34pm
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    @ BlueDreams
    Haha yeah it can be strange. I had some readers saying it was impossible but it's actually not. I have heard stories and watched 'I didn't know I was pregnant' and most cases the baby was growing farther along the spine they would gain a bit of weight or whatever and still have some pregnancy symptoms but they don't think anything of it and they usually find out they are pregnant is when they go to the hospital or they see for themselves that they are delivering a baby themselves.
    July 21st, 2013 at 04:09pm
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    @ teenagedream91
    That is so strange...
    July 21st, 2013 at 01:47pm
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    @ BlueDreams
    Yeah. There are cases where the baby will grow near the spine so she won't be showing but will have pregnancy symptoms. Most women don't realize the symptoms and all.
    It can happen. I don't know why they would be that special case of making it happen and all
    July 20th, 2013 at 03:04am
  • BlueDreams

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    @ teenagedream91
    She discovered that she was pregnant IN LABOR?!
    And that's true and makes perfect sense to what could happen in real life.
    July 20th, 2013 at 01:14am
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    @ BlueDreams
    Brutal honesty is really hard to hear for me but now that I'm older I'm alright with it depending on the subject.
    Yeah it was pretty hard. It was short but to the point how she was so disappointed with the ending after all this time of reading it lol I was like not all marriages stay together. My plot was a married couple dealing with a death of a best friend and her husband withdraws from her and in the end of it they divorce and start over again building their relationship back up after a few years of their kid growing, which She discovered she was pregnant when she went into labor blah blah blah but the girl didnt like how they didn't stay together. Sometimes it takes everything to fall part before building it back up again with a new and stronger foundation.
    July 19th, 2013 at 02:48pm
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    @ teenagedream91
    That's true. Brutal honesty hurts sometimes.
    Really? Oh goodness, I bet that was intense but hard to read!
    July 19th, 2013 at 12:10pm
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    @ BlueDreams
    Lol that's true but man some readers are hardcore and will be brutal and tell you how disappointed they were at the ending. Happened to me once and that just shocked me lol
    July 18th, 2013 at 09:28pm
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    @ teenagedream91
    That's perfectly normal. Sometimes ideas just rule over the writer and we have no chance haha
    July 18th, 2013 at 09:19am
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    @ BlueDreams
    Usually if I make the right decision lol and sometimes I get too excited when I write I can't get everything out correctly.
    July 18th, 2013 at 02:28am
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    @ teenagedream91
    But that's a good way to go, dear. It makes the plot better and better.
    July 18th, 2013 at 01:55am
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    @ BlueDreams
    There can be and some other things I have planned out just in case if I don't like the original lol I get picky and choose something different.
    July 17th, 2013 at 03:24pm
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    @ teenagedream91
    I sense there's something more, I can't wait.
    July 17th, 2013 at 09:53am
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    @ BlueDreams
    She has and she's really cautious. Hammer has done some serious damage and there might be someone else too. We will see how it all pans out.
    July 17th, 2013 at 12:32am
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    @ January Rose
    Tony always tries to wiggle his way out of things doesn't he? Or tries to get into Dasha's pants. The first attempt, well physical attempt to trying now that I think about it. He hasn't touched her inappropriately so far. He will get more touchy lol I'm glad you like it so much
    July 17th, 2013 at 12:31am
  • BlueDreams

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    @ teenagedream91
    I understand her logic really. She has been hurt before, it's her way to defend herself.
    I hope it does!
    Uhh I'm looking forward to it.
    July 16th, 2013 at 09:23pm
  • January Rose

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    I just love Tony and Dasha. I laughed at the end of this chapter because Tony is so persistent. Loved his apology btw.
    July 16th, 2013 at 08:46pm