Iron Will - Comments

Another amazing header, I like the story too :)

Okay, as you said, this chapter was very hot!! :D

Well, I'll be damned. If that wasn't the best damn hetero sex scene I have ever read, I don't even know. I was blown away. So far, I love Peyton. I should also mention that I am biased to the name Peyton because it's so original and gorgeous. Fantastic detail, I will certainly be continuing this read, and maybe a few others?

Wow
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That is a way to start a story. I'll be damned. I don't even know what to say, I just read an innocent poem and came over here to smutsmutsmut. Wow. Yeah. WOO TONY, A WOMAN'S MAN. So, uhm, I'm subscribing to this.

Interesting way to start… The sex scene was really well done I must say. The description. You could write a romantic novel or something >.> At first I found it awkward on the starting choice but then as it wrapped up I could finally see why you choose this way. It fits Tony’s character. Great work.

Really good story and I hope to see more soon!

I really didn't expect that first chapter to be what it was. Just kinda jumped at me. Aha, actually as I read it, I was like "nah, that's not what that's about." Then I read the second sentence and I was like "yep".

But in all honesty, you're a wonderful writer. Amazing description and detail. I haven't read all the way through the story yet, but I intend to. I like the character Peyton, and I absolutely adore the name. After first I thought the professor was creeping on her, but I see how you were setting up the story.

You've done well so far!

I loved, loved, loved, loved this story. I adore Iron Man as well!
Man that first chapter! whoo smokin' hot!

Ok, smut in the first chapter? Amazing haha. THAT's how you draw someone's attention! I love the banner, by the way. Again, the descriptions and tone are on point and you don't disappoint.

Wow! That first chapter was amazing and so hot! I like your smut writing style for sure. I love how you switched up words for describing their genitalia and it was so...raw and sexy! I subscribed to this and recommended for you as well because it was a lovely read. I'm off to read more chapters now.

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OKAY YOU ARE JUST AMAZING. AMAZING. I EVEN SUBCRIBED! Well anyway, I was going to read the first two chapters...but I ended up falling in love and reading the whole damn thing. I regret nothing. This story is so darn good. I lobe how you balanced the details and dialogue. I also love how you set up the characters.

Tony is exactly how I pictured him. Even Pepper too! The whole universe is built realistic and true. Just like your other stories. All of it is just great to me. I love your writing style too. It's like you write as if you are down to earth, not stuck up and trying to add confusing words. It's written beautifully and I just love it.

I have no complaints at all for this! Great job!

This is suck a great idea, I love it. Iron Man is my favourite Avenger as well so what a bonus :D

I think you really capture Tony Stark's character perfectly. I think it is really hard to write a truly sarcastic character. A lot of people tend to overdue it, or make remarks when they seem silly. This is perfect. I feel like this stands side by side with the movies.

I do feel like it is lacking in the drama department. Unfortunately, Tony's witty remarks are not enough to keep me fully interested in a story. I hate to say I was a bit bored and had to kind of push through it.

I think once it begins to pick back up though, it will be excellent.

There's a new chapter.
I loved it! Keep up the awesome work!

I was seriously going to comment, "I don't remember reading this chapter..." and as it turns out it's a new chapter. XD Considering I didn't have my email open I didn't get the update notice for this. So glad I decided to just read this today. Lol. ANYWAYS! I definitely like the way the story is progressing and absolutely cannot wait for more!

Iron Man 3 at midnight here too! Hell yeah! I am definitely going to recommend and subscribe to this. I love Peyton's character and your portrayal of Tony. Perfect.

Iron Man 3 at midnight here too! Hell yeah! I am definitely going to recommend and subscribe to this. I love Peyton's character and your portrayal of Tony. Perfect.

Iron Man 3 at midnight here too! Hell yeah! I am definitely going to recommend and subscribe to this. I love Peyton's character and your portrayal of Tony. Perfect.

Uhm, okay. First chapter...you can write a really good smut scene, not even lying. Just, yeah, okay.
Anywho! I'm not a huge fan of Tony Stark, but damn if he isn't handsome. I love the name Peyton as well, and I love her character. You've done such an amazing job at developing her character and your descriptions are great. I can't say it's my style, but you've done a fabulous job with it!

Haha, wow. First chapter is a sex scene! Wasn't expecting that at all. Not saying it was a bad start, just unexpected. =P

I'm not a huge fan of Tony Stark, but I remember see the Avengers and thinking he was a huge womanizer...which proved right in the first chapter. I also noticed how Peyton is the name of your female character...same with mine! Weird eh?
Anywho, for me not to be all that interested when I first saw the summary, you've done very well with your writing. I actually enjoyed reading it. Keep it up!