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Author [holysmokes]
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I Can't Change.
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holy hell I'm captivated.
September 27th, 2012 at 05:14am
onlythegooddieyoung
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Oh my God. That's so intense! Hahaha.
The only thing I have to say is be careful of your tenses. It switches back and forth between present and past tense a couple of times, which can make things kind of confusing.
But this story is super hardcore. I can't wait to read more. :D
September 27th, 2012 at 12:26am
valleydream
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Oh god what happens to her?!
September 26th, 2012 at 08:58pm
FLAREBEARR
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fantastic I love it :)
September 26th, 2012 at 08:58pm
onedirectionforever
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good up to now, looking forward to the next chapter, subscribed:) xx
September 26th, 2012 at 06:11pm
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Really loving it c:
September 26th, 2012 at 07:34am
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