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  • I Can't Change.

    I Can't Change. (100)

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    holy hell I'm captivated.
    September 27th, 2012 at 05:14am
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    Oh my God. That's so intense! Hahaha.

    The only thing I have to say is be careful of your tenses. It switches back and forth between present and past tense a couple of times, which can make things kind of confusing.

    But this story is super hardcore. I can't wait to read more. :D
    September 27th, 2012 at 12:26am
  • valleydream

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    Oh god what happens to her?!
    September 26th, 2012 at 08:58pm
  • FLAREBEARR

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    fantastic I love it :)
    September 26th, 2012 at 08:58pm
  • onedirectionforever

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    good up to now, looking forward to the next chapter, subscribed:) xx
    September 26th, 2012 at 06:11pm
  • valleydream

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    Really loving it c:
    September 26th, 2012 at 07:34am
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