The first thing I would like to say; IT'S A GAME OF THRONES FAN FICTION, YES! You have no idea how happy I am to have been directed to this fic, I've not read one like this before, and I'm glad.
You have a very unique style of writing, I couldn't really spot any major grammatical errors, which let me tell you is a relief. I love the amount of description that you have included within the chapters and the summary hooks you right in.
The layout is clear and it's easy to read the text, so well done there.
Overall, this is an amazing start, and I can't wait to read more :)
@ SyntheticHatred I completely agree nobody tops Dany and Arya but I do think Lena Headley is doind a brilliant job as Cersei in the show, she's great at making people hate her lol.
I'm glad someone else likes the idea of Gendry and Arya, I was worried because of the age difference but I guess Arya being 19 and they're both consenting adults, it should be alright :]
I can see Ginny/Draco if only because I think he could put his disgust for a Weasley aside if it meant hurting Harry. I've always been interested in Neville/Luna stories though. Either way I'm sure it will be great.
Me too actually. I mean yea Cersei is a freaking psycho and two faced as the day is long. But she's got guts and brains and knows how to use them together. That and in the show she is a brilliant character. If it was only a battle of wills and cunning she'd be the winner. But dany and Arya are my def favorites. I will always favor a female that isn't afraid to fight with the men.
@ SyntheticHatred Me too! I just love all the female characters in the series, even Cersei, just because I'm a sucker for the strong-willed independent woman type.
Yeah, I'm actually having trouble writing Druna the only thing they have in common are being pureblood, thinking of a Ginny/Draco and Neville/Luna instead or an Avengers fanfic.
Arya's my favorite, or at least one of my favorites, as well. I've always thought she and Dany be the most interesting to lock in a room together. Im honestly not a fan of "druna" and I'm starting to cringe at the nonstop writing of hp fanfics, but I'd be very interested in reading your version since I already know I like your writing. Anyways can't wait for more =]