Crossed Off - Comments

I was kind of suspicious of Matt since it was revealed that if he doesn't go on a hit for a while he goes kind of nuts, so the psycho factor was already there, but once I read the final chapter I was still shocked. Especially when he accidentally killed Shiloh! I loved the story so much, and am quite sad that it's finally come to an end.

Holy shit tht was awesome didnt see tht coming and now I think about it, Matt does get kind of crazy when he doesn't go out to do hits and shit so yeah but damn tht was awesome, great ending :)

Wow I had my thoughts of it being Matt in this chapter before Matt tells her he killed everyone lol
I just can't believe everyone died :(
And Matt's the one who killed them
I wished it was a nightmare and everyone could wake up and be alive

I've got suspicious at Matt since chapter 33 and not really suprised that it's finally revealed that he's the killer. But girl you have such an amazing idea for this story. And you've written it amazingly too. Great job. You're a great writer :)

I honestly don't know if i liked three ending or not. Too many people died and i wasn't expecting that.

God it's gettin sadder and sadder, god what is Jimmy and Matt goin to do is Jimmy really goin to wait for Goliath to kill him off or is Matt goin to wait in the shadows of Jimmy's apartment to kill tht sick son of a bitch, I just want this last chapter to come so I can stop being sad, it was all fun and games until the guys started gettin killed off, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Why are killing everyone off? :(
Update soon
I'm sad it's going to be over soon
Great chapter
Even if you just killed Johnny off
Who's next?
Can't wait to find out what the hell happens

All I kno is tht Jimmy or Johnny better not be fucking dead thts all I care about right now, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I'm so sad it's ending
Great chapter
Update soon
This shit is crazy everyone is dying :(
I can't wait to find out what the fuck is going on o_O

WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK?!?!?! Really of all fucking people fucking Goliath what the hell??? He kill his friends......HIS OWN FUCKING DAUGHTER!!! OMG THIS IS FUCKING INSANE!!!!! What possesses him to do this like seriously, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Great chapter
Update soon
Why did he kill them all i dont understand,he killed his OWN daughter why?
I still hoped it was a bad dream :(
Can't wait to find out what will happen now

This chapter felt incomplete at the end. I do like the story, but this chapter felt incomplete.

I'm addicted to the story. Please dnt kill Matt! :( poor zacky keep updating :)

You cant kill the guys off!! D: No No No

What the hell dude, y r u killing the guys off??? I don't like this one bit I really don't if this is becuz Matt is in love with Shiloh thn thts some petty payback, seriously who is the motherfucker killing the guys.....Matt I hope u find tht bitch and kill him, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

WHY... are you killing them off :'(
Update soon
Who the hell is killing them off?
Why? Why? Why? :'(
Great chapter even if its sad :(
I can't wait to find who it is and what will happen

Oh wow who's killing them?
Great chapter
Update soon
What is everyone going to do?
Two of them are dead, who's next?
Can't wait to find out what the hell happens next

Oh wow who's killing them?
Great chapter
Update soon
What is everyone going to do?
Two of them are dead, who's next?
Can't wait to find out what the hell happens next

Well shit now Lindsey's dead who the fuck is it tht is killing the guys off, if it isn't Kingsley then who and I will be damned if it is a hit man tht was hired by Shiloh's parents, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Ps. I agree about Jimmy's death, still a touchy subject even tho it's been three years now u kno....I still find it as an unrealistic event tht change people's realities, he will be missed tho truly missed :(

Love this story! I'm a serial reader, and it's not often I find one I read in a day! But I did with this! Love how the story keeps you engaged, the characters seem realistic, and the point of view changes! Can't wait for more to come!
:)