Crossed Off - Comments

this is a really good stroy cant wait till ylou update

Why did Brian have to die :'(
Update soon
Can't wait to find out what happens
Wow Lily knows the trust now
Great chapter

Matt u should have just told Johnny to stay with Jimmy and Zacky not alone in ur apartment, oh god can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

can't believe tht Brian is dead, how the fuck did it happen and who the fuck did it.....Matt shit just got real don't bring Shiloh back to ur place ever becuz if the motherfucker who got Brian was able to sneak into his place and kill him easily thn the same motherfucker can go into ur place and kill u and if Shiloh's there kidnap her and kill her so don't bring her by no more I don't care how much she begs don't bring her to ur place ever go somewhere close by like a park or something, Jimmy, Zacky and Johnny please lock ur doors and keep ur gun within reach like under ur pillow and if u hear a noise be like a ninja and go into stealth mode don't kill the person until they state their name if its a guy working for Kingsley kill him if its ur friend bop them in the back of their heads for scaring the shit out of you and tell them tht they almost got themselves killed, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Brian dead? :'(
I'm sad now
Great chapter
Update soon
I can't wait to find out what will happen
What the hell happen to Brian? Who killed him? How did they kill him?

Great chapter
Aww Matt is scared of a girl lol then again she is talking about taking his boys off lol
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That's funny I had chili last night
Can't wait find out what happens

Love Lily, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Shit is about to hit the fan! What's gonna happen! I want---wait scratch that---I HAVE to know what's gonna happen! Update ASAP please!

Oh shit what is Brian goin to say, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Great chapter
Oh man what is Brian going to think about this?
Will he tell the guys?
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Can't wait to find out what happens
I could see the Matt and guys killing someone if they hurt her lol

I love this story XD
Update soon
Great chapter
Yea she should of made a fake name up
Can't wait to find out what happens next
I feel like things will hit the fan and if it does, will it be at the ball?

Noooo Shiloh u come up with a fake ass name like Ben or Brett but don't tell ur friend his real name she just might google him up or something omg this can't end well, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Told u, u should have taken her ass home last night but noooo u was thinking with ur dick u fucking idiot so now u got to take her ass home and never find again she is goin to be on house arrest for real this time, great chapter I loved it can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Matt don't be an idiot, u go on those jobs with the guys and take Shiloh's ass home before it gets too late at night tht her parents call the cops again anyhoo can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Don't do nothing stupid Matt, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Love it, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Love it, Goliath accepts Matt and Lindsey relationship in a sense becuz they aren't dating, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Yea good luck Kingsley becuz the guys aren't going to kill Shiloh anytime soon, I think tht they should send her and her family away and just say tht they killed her, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I don't get it Kingsley if u didnt trust her in the first place y kidnap her and thn when it's time to let her leave u try to kill her, thts stupid as hell and backwards, i just hope she can keep her mouth shit becuz if she cant i think its time to kill her, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Love it, love the cute little moment between Brian and Matt so adorable, anyhoo can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)