Crossed Off - Comments

Another great chapter!

Hahaha, naked Brian in the hallway. This story is great! Can't wait for more

Love it, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

@ crazehninja
I didn't like making her so young, (like originally she was nineteen) but in order to line things up (I needed the guys to not want to kill her because she was 'still a kid' so that they didn't just off her as soon as they got back to the warehouse and among other things) I had to lower her age a bit. I probably could have gotten by with sixteen but I did it really just to stay safe so I could move pieces in place to set things up properly.

I hate that you made her fifteen I was reading the story and loving it until came upon that little piece of information. That's kinda disgusting

Hahaha, I can only imagine Jimmy calling Zacky his Bitch! I can't wait to read more, this is an amazing story, I love it more and more with each chapter.

Well I wonder what Brian is goin to say when he hears about this shocking news, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Love it, poor Matt just having a bad night and thn he slept with Shiloh and gaining feelings for her, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Hahaha, I can only imagine Zacky hyped up on Rockstar. Poor Matt, gaining feelings for Shiloh when everything is almost over. I can't wait for more!

Love it, Goliath u need to chill, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

love this!! update soon please :D

Wow Zacky and Johnny u took betting to a whole other level thts classy, anyhoo can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Hahaha, betting apartments in video games, that's priceless! I can't wait to read more!

Great chapter, poor Matt gettin cocked blocked by Zacky and on top of tht being tired, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Hahaha Another amazing chapter!

O.o y does Zacky need a reminder to kill Johnny I mean what did Johnny do to u Zacky, but u r funny when u r playin videogames tho a lot of vulgar words, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Hahaha, Zacky is funny when he plays videogames!

Ok Shiloh is perfectly fine she was just sleepin, anyhoo love this story, so is the hostage deal off now tht Shiloh's parents called the cops when they were t suppose to, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Umm what about Shiloh, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Shiloh u r seriously slow for thinking tht u can convince Johnny to let u go and run away with him, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)