To Be Alone With You - Comments

  • State Of Grace

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    Oh jeez, agh I want Kennedy and her to be together but then I feel really bad for John and stuff. And I'm just guessing and pondering it, but from their past relationship I feel like maybe John was more devoted to her than she was to him. Like he was willing to do anything for her (such as go to college), but then again we haven't seen how he's like to her. I love it, update soon!
    October 30th, 2012 at 01:03pm
  • daydreamz

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    I don't like how distraught john is over Josselyn.
    October 30th, 2012 at 04:33am
  • vices

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    so I think this is a really good story, but I thought the first chapter was a bit wordy. it's like there was too much description, so I couldn't really read everything and process it all completely, does that even make any sense.........?

    ANYWAYS.
    this is great! (:
    October 28th, 2012 at 12:40am
  • State Of Grace

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    I really like this story a lot. I like how every chapter starts with past them and present them. I feel bad that john's being so mean to her but then again I feel for him having to hang around the person who broke your heart. Update soon, I can't wait to find out what you have in store for this, and not to mention what all went down in their relationship.
    October 27th, 2012 at 10:32pm
  • AlyBallyBee

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    Love this so far :) update soon
    October 23rd, 2012 at 10:38pm
  • daydreamz

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    I really want to know what Josselyn did to make John hate her so much.
    October 23rd, 2012 at 05:00am
  • daydreamz

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    I like it so far! Can't wait for more! :)
    October 16th, 2012 at 08:05pm
  • Lucille Ball.

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    I really like this and I'm excited to see where you're going to go with it! Hopefully you update soon!
    October 14th, 2012 at 10:20pm