To Be Alone With You - Comments

I am in love! The way you explain things makes me feel like I'm there, watching everyone interact! My favorite part of the first chapter was when John met Josselyn. The detail was brilliant and I found myself grow more and more interested with every word. I admire your style of writing and it inspires me to become a better writer myself. I am excited to read every single chapter and hopefully discover other stories you have written. Excellent start! (:

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Despite listening to the maines music a lot, I've never read a fan fic about them. This was a great way to meet them through the world of fanfiction. Great job! You did a amazing job writing the characters. I really enjoyed reading this :)

I really loved this story, there was no real bad guy, just people doing what they really wanted. I love the way you wrote their motives and needs and wants, so each had equal opportunity to tell their story. This is one of the better fanfictions I've read, thank you so much for putting in the time and effort to weave a story that has such a justifiable and real ending.

This story was wonderful. It was well put together, dramatic, and fun to read. You're writing is really lovely.
I had fun reading this & am sad that it's over. Although I am more than happy with the way it ended!

I'm sad to see this story end but it was perfect. Could I get the songs though?

Bittersweet and adventurous, this story was worth the wait for the end. I loved it.

That last line made it perfect. I'm glad that her and Kennedy worked it out, and I also love how you left some mystery within the finale with not going into full detail on whether or not her and John will be together or what she'll be doing in the future. I really liked this.

As for the story in entirety it was absolutely amazing and I'm so glad that I got to read this. Everything about it between the love triangle between John Kennedy and josselyn to the sad mess she had once known finally being put back together and leaving he happy. This was a fantastic story, and I will definitely be reading more of your stories to come!

I like this ending too...it's semi-open ended, semi-happily ever after (at least in my mind haha). I picture Josselyn figuring herself out in San Fran while John stands by her side supporting her, they get together like they should, and eventually Joss and Kennedy become friends. Even if this isn't how you picture it don't let me know because I want to keep pretending that's how it will end up hahaha.

Also, I don't think I got all the songs so if you could send me the link with all of them that would be awesome.

Also (again), will you be writing another story? (Even if it's not one about The Maine I love your writing and will definitely read another story if you do one)

Well hell. I don't even know what to say. Sometimes it is better to just choose yourself over some silly boys. Less heartbreak and more independence that way. Great job

I think the ending was perfect it left a sense of peace

Oh my...that was beautiful. I'm glad that they finally found their way. Or at least they try, but they're doing pretty good job.
Thank you for this story, because it's one of those that made ​​me fell in love with The Maine even more... even if it's my only-new-few-months-obsession. But totally true, and I know that for many years.

aw man...i can't believe this story is over already....man, this has been so much fun to read :) great storyline and i look forward to reading your future stories :)

Such a sad chapter with the whole Casey thing but also such a good chapter because they've started to fix things. My emotions are just a mess haha.

Wow this was amazing, please try to update,even that you lost your inspiration this story is one of the best on mibba

What a devastating chapter.

And what a heavy thing (Casey's death) to have
weighing on your shoulders!

Buts its great that Joss finally told somebody.
This chapter seriously did a beautiful job of answering all of the unsolved questions that have been lingering from early on.

Oh! and I would like to recommend listening to
Dum Dum Girls 'Trees and Flowers'.

It is the perfect compliment to this chapter!

:'(

excited to see where this goes. hope you update again soon!

Finally. Finally. This was so emotional and beautiful. Thanks for the update. Well, the loss of inspiration is the worst thing that can be. I have three ideas in my head and I can't write them because I know I will probably lose interest in them or something, just like now, I have to write background chapter in my story and I...just can't.
But that's enough about me.
It was beautiful. I love J-Joss. It could be their ship-name! I'm sorry! ;33
Keep writing.

Damn. I'm getting all emotional because of you! Hahaha. But thanks for the update. This is definitely one of the better John stories I've read

Love this story!! Please update soon!