November 3rd, 2012 at 06:53pm
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Very sweet, lovely little story. It's very ambiguous, which I like--anyone could be saying it. It isn't overly flowery or difficult to read. It could easily be any person's thoughts as they lay in bed.
I loved how you left this piece genderless because anyone could relate to it and I love that so much. Honestly you really wrote something amazing.
I honestly think this piece though very simple and stright forward was complete and utter perfection! :) I loved it so so so much! Great job!