When the Lights Go out You Will Understand - Comments

  • Lee Hi;

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    nooo my frankie dies!!!!!
    :'( this story was really good and it really makes you think. i'm glad frankie didn't succumb to peer pressure and shoot everyone but what that officer did was uncalled for. he never shot anyone and even tho this is a fictional story it happens all the time. frankie/gee <3
    August 8th, 2011 at 05:40am
  • Fedex

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    Wow. That was heart breaking.
    There was such honestly in the words that it made me cringe.
    I know the story was fictional, but it was very realistic.
    It's one of those stories that make you think.

    I really love this. I found it incredible. In Love
    August 11th, 2008 at 10:32am
  • rabidxvampirexbunny

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    aw that almost made me cry.......sad as hell.
    July 30th, 2008 at 09:35am
  • Coruja Do Vampiro

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    That was amazing! From the first papragraph i was hooked, there was so much emotion in the whole story and the ending was brillant i was on the edge of may seat. it's sad but crappy stuff like this does happen!
    xxx
    July 28th, 2008 at 04:26am
  • Catastrophic Corie;;

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    Oh my god!
    That was soo good.
    And really sad.
    I liked it a lot.
    But wow, that was some
    Crazy shiz that went
    Down!
    =D
    June 1st, 2008 at 08:31pm
  • Venomous.Vampire

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    well, i'm not ashamed to say i'm crying.
    that was awful, poor frank. he just snapped and it was all their fault.
    if i was gerard, i'd have killed myself by now.
    he's extremely strong =')
    Love x♥x
    May 31st, 2008 at 07:03pm
  • M451n

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    i am at a loss for words. It was really good though. I love stories that don't explain everything till the end.
    May 31st, 2008 at 01:34pm
  • faking_innocence

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    That was so sad
    i cried... :(
    May 31st, 2008 at 07:28am
  • Talion

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    My heart pounding really hard.
    This was different from a lot of the stuff I've read today.
    Every chapter there was a different emotion to mix in with the 'love.'
    The entire thing just sorta blew me away.
    The ending was so sad, but sweet and angry at the same time.
    Bravo. ;)
    May 31st, 2008 at 04:08am
  • JessicaRIOT.

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    *wipes tears from cheeks*
    OH my gee, That was so sad.
    <333333333
    May 31st, 2008 at 03:51am
  • yourverity

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    that was amazing!
    i mean, it was sad... but beautifully written
    May 31st, 2008 at 03:45am
  • KranK

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    Okay so that ended different than I predicted *le gasp*
    I mean, it's a terrible thing what happened, but at least Frank didn't kill himself...? Like, is that a conselation? Haha...
    But this was written beautifully... So beautifully...
    May 31st, 2008 at 03:40am
  • Alice Verney

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    noooo frankie at least there is a acase agaisnt the officer that did it
    May 31st, 2008 at 03:39am
  • life is but a dream

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    I am anxiously waiting for the last chapter...
    You build you the tension really well.
    May 29th, 2008 at 03:35pm
  • Beetlejuice

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    I lurrve it :]
    May 20th, 2008 at 10:56am
  • Chemothy

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    What a great update!

    It took you a while! But it's okay, because you have a good excuse.

    Update SOOOOOONNNNN!

    (please)

    :)
    May 11th, 2008 at 01:10am
  • Venomous.Vampire

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    KranK:
    This is so beautiful...
    Frank dies, doesn't he...

    *sigh*

    i knew it!! Gaah!
    what!?

    oh.

    i'd forgotten frank must be dead.

    *sigh*

    the last chapter is gonna make me cry isn't it.

    xoxo
    May 10th, 2008 at 04:42pm
  • Venomous.Vampire

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    aw, this story is so beautiful.
    it's reall romantic aswell and i'm a bit of a sucker for romance.
    i nearly cried and i actually smiled when i read the bit when frank shouted out fo his window.
    xoxo
    May 10th, 2008 at 04:41pm
  • KranK

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    This is so beautiful...
    Frank dies, doesn't he...

    *sigh*

    i knew it!! Gaah!
    May 7th, 2008 at 12:38am
  • Catastrophic Corie;;

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    That was really cute.
    I like it.
    MOREEEEEEEEE
    May 6th, 2008 at 01:02pm