When the Lights Go out You Will Understand - Comments

  • Alice Verney

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    awww they said i love yous
    May 6th, 2008 at 12:55am
  • Smashed Pumpkin.

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    wow, this is beautiful! i love the way you portray emotions, :D x
    May 5th, 2008 at 09:31pm
  • DecimatedDreams

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    Awww so sweet!!!

    That literally just made me squeal out loud tehe

    In Love I'm in love with your story <333

    Congratulations about your baby brother (:
    May 5th, 2008 at 09:28pm
  • LipstickLullabies_

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    aww congrats about your baby bro btw :)

    Awesome update, I really like this three-shot-thingie so far :D

    I'm gonna be so annoyed when the third part is posted coz after that there'll be no more to read :(

    xo
    May 5th, 2008 at 09:13pm
  • Catastrophic Corie;;

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    That was good.
    MOREEEEEEEE
    April 20th, 2008 at 09:30pm
  • xAwSugarx

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    omg i love this!

    i didnt even know it was a flashback for the whole first part.

    wonderfullll =D

    -a
    April 19th, 2008 at 02:19pm
  • xPepsiXWhorex

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    beth, i know that i've been an absolutly terrible friend by not talking to you much latley, but i have to say that this is one of the most original ferards that i've read in a long long time. great work.

    at first i was like WTF why is it all italized. and then i got to the end and i wanted to aplaud you for your amazinginess. you do know that you are truly gifted right? Because you are. And i wouldn't say that if i didn't belieive it with all of my heart. Bc i do. I really do believe that you are one of the most gifted people on here. And you have so so so much potential. It blows my mind. I only wish to have half of the talent and originality that you posses. And your talent shows in every word, every line, every story.

    Bravo, and i can't wait for more! and i haven't told you latley that i love you, so btw i do. You're amazing as a writter and a person. XD

    So now that i've embarressed myself and probably you, i will go now. I luv u girly! even tho i 'm a shitty friend alot of the time.

    xoxoxoxoox forever, jen

    Btw sorry my comment is so fucking long. :D
    April 19th, 2008 at 02:55am
  • lisablackrose

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    Aww, cute, look forward to more.x
    April 18th, 2008 at 10:48am
  • KranK

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    Frank's gonna kill himself...
    I KNOW IT..
    and its gonna be so sad because theyre gonna bond and then Frank is going to off himself
    HENCE THE REASON GERARD IS IN THERAPYY!!! *breaks down into a fit of tears*
    me and these kinds of stories have a love/hate relationship...
    April 17th, 2008 at 08:30pm
  • LipstickLullabies_

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    awesome, i like it :)
    more soon? :D
    xox
    April 17th, 2008 at 11:33am
  • omg ur so straight!

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    i love it!!
    cant wait for more!
    April 16th, 2008 at 10:33am
  • Venomous.Vampire

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    omg, i love it! it's so awesome.

    more soon please.

    it's quite original and i love short stories =]
    April 15th, 2008 at 09:00pm
  • DecimatedDreams

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    I love it!!!

    Soooo sweet!!! I wanna know what happens next XD
    April 15th, 2008 at 12:35pm
  • Rain On My Parade.

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    You have me very curouis as to what happens next.
    7 i like the way you have chosen to write this out.
    its very interesting. : )
    waiting for the next updates... x)
    April 15th, 2008 at 10:04am
  • faking_innocence

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    awww its soo sweet, more soon!
    April 15th, 2008 at 07:30am
  • Famous-Last-Words

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    Aw, I love it! So sweet, and poor Frankie, give him a hug from me! Update it soon, :)
    April 14th, 2008 at 04:28pm
  • Alice Verney

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    poor gee what happens next????
    April 14th, 2008 at 01:45am
  • Chemothy

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    Oh shiznit!!! Just the first part, made me want to melt!

    Put the other parts up soon! Great job!
    April 14th, 2008 at 01:10am
  • ohrikki

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    Friggin sweet more soon?
    April 14th, 2008 at 01:08am