Let me start off by saying one constructive criticism: some grammar editing should be done, specifically the set up of the dialogue. Make sure things are capitalized and there are commons/periods at the end of proper sentences in the dialogue. Just a little glitch, is all. But, also, I want to compliment you on how clever your dialogue is. I highly doubt it is easy to write a Sherlock story and be as clever and quick-witted and intelligent as the characters in the series are presented. You're doing a terrific job there. You've captured each character very well and I do love Hanna. I'm very interested in the coming chapters! So I do hope you write soon :] Hope you're having a wonderful weekend.
@ Brokendreamer728 I kinda have a thing about super short girls with really tall guys, i was going to have her be 5'0 as compared to the 6'0 of Sherlock
@ madefornight Whichever is easier for you although character would be cooler. How tall is she I'm just wondering because I'm short 5'2 to be exact and I want to know if she's like me
@ Brokendreamer728 Depends on what you mean, do you want pictures in the character section or do you want drawings? Because while im proud of my art skill they are not that great...
This story is amazing I really hope you continue on for many chapters. I can hardly wait to see how everyone reacts to Sherlock. Do you think you do pictures it'd be nice to see what Hanna looks like if you can't I understand.
@ fallen_angel94 Basically yes, it's s based on the BBC version of Sherlock. Its on Netflix if you would like some background information :) i highly recommend you watch, its very good.
I love this. Incredibly so. I die a little every time a chapter ends. I need more. This break with no Sherlock is killing me. Your story makes me happy. Please update. A lot. And more often if you can.