Holy crap. Just... Wow. I gotta say, seeing your update made my day happy. It's a slow day at work and getting to read your update was awesome. I cannot wait to see what Tomas has planned!!!
I love this because it is so different than most Sherlock fan fictions :) While I have enjoyed just about every Sherlock story I've come across, your ideas are so much more original and keeps me guessing! Great story, can't wait to see what happens next!
Loved the last two chapters and the stark contrast between him shutting off his emotions to him being sweet (if a little misguided) in the bonus chapter. I am looking forward to more updates. Congrats on gaining your independence!
If you weren't receiving the silent treatment from me I would say that: This chapter is the cutest thing I have ever read. And I hope to see another chapter like that before the conclusion of this story. cc: <3
Awe!! That was so sweet!! And the end was very well written, it made my heart hurt a bit :) I seriously laughed at one part though: “John, you are familiar with the English language aren’t you?” “No it would appear not." Haha brilliant!! And thank you for the extra chapter, good luck with moving!
@ ConstantChaos; when I can, Dear, I will. but I have a lot of packing to do in such a short time :/ not locking forward to that at ALL. but hopefully once i'm out and on my own I'll be able to write more and there for update more often!
I just moved out this weekend!!! It's great! Ad thank you so much for updating, it was such a brilliant chapter. Like I said before, you portray sherlock perfectly, an I wonder what will happen with his emotions now!! Gah please update soon!!!
YOU ARE SOOO CRUEL!!! I haven't been able to read your story till now and now that I have I really wish it was next Friday!!! This is such a brilliant story! Oh my gosh. Tomas is so... Well I love him because he's so evil, you know?? Ooh I can't wait to see who stepped up... Gah please make next Friday come faster!!
@ madefornight Haha sorry I couldn't comment last time, it's hard toget online right now but I saw you updated yesterday and so I sent your chapter to my phone so I could read it on my lunch break! Can't wait for your next update! An the only way I'd ever stop reading this is if I died :)
@ ConstantChaos; you have know idea how happy I am to hear from you! when you didn't comment on the last chapter I though you'd either left or died lols :) good to have you back
Holy crap... This is absolutely amazing!!! You write so well, and you convey sherlock perfectly. Hanna is such a Well written character, I feel like she's actually in the show!! I love this so much and cannot wait for more!!! The cliff hangers are great, I love them!!