Deducing Tragedy Part One: See No Evil - Comments

Nooooooooooo not the caaattssss! You've just broken this cat lady's heart :( Great update though! I can't wait for the next one!

this is really good!! do conintue and don't keep me waiting!! only joking, don't rush

... Mycroft? The letters are from Mycroft? O.o

Love this!! I think you did a great job capturing sherlocks character :) can't wait for an update!

Why are you uncertain of this one? It is brilliant :)

Let me start off by saying one constructive criticism: some grammar editing should be done, specifically the set up of the dialogue. Make sure things are capitalized and there are commons/periods at the end of proper sentences in the dialogue. Just a little glitch, is all. But, also, I want to compliment you on how clever your dialogue is. I highly doubt it is easy to write a Sherlock story and be as clever and quick-witted and intelligent as the characters in the series are presented. You're doing a terrific job there. You've captured each character very well and I do love Hanna. I'm very interested in the coming chapters! So I do hope you write soon :] Hope you're having a wonderful weekend.

Wow her ex is fucking crazy.
Actually that's an understatement...
And noooo this story just gets better and better lol
I love it!

Wow, her ex did it? What a shitty person... I love this sooooo much! Its definitely not going to crap! Keep it up!

@ madefornight
Sound kickass can't wait to read more

@ Brokendreamer728
I kinda have a thing about super short girls with really tall guys, i was going to have her be 5'0 as compared to the 6'0 of Sherlock

@ madefornight
Whichever is easier for you although character would be cooler. How tall is she I'm just wondering because I'm short 5'2 to be exact and I want to know if she's like me

@ Brokendreamer728
Depends on what you mean, do you want pictures in the character section or do you want drawings? Because while im proud of my art skill they are not that great...

This story is amazing I really hope you continue on for many chapters. I can hardly wait to see how everyone reacts to Sherlock. Do you think you do pictures it'd be nice to see what Hanna looks like if you can't I understand.

Ok thanks

@ fallen_angel94
Basically yes, it's s based on the BBC version of Sherlock. Its on Netflix if you would like some background information :) i highly recommend you watch, its very good.

So is this the old shelock holmes but set in modern times

Ahhhhhhhh yay! Sherlock's back! Excitemeeeeeennnnnnttttttt!

absolutely love the story update soon pretty please :)

I love this. Incredibly so. I die a little every time a chapter ends. I need more. This break with no Sherlock is killing me. Your story makes me happy. Please update. A lot. And more often if you can.

Wow! This is actually amazing! I'm really excited for the update :)